| Reviews for Another chance |
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   dippytrippy122 chapter 51 . 9/2 Brilliant story. Loved it. Fifth time reading it, and I had a lot of extra ground to cover. Interested so see what else you guys do:) I’ll be checking out the sequel now. Easily my favorite Pokemon crossover! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/13 I'm not an expert in pokemon or fanfic but I think would be a better Idea for everyone if you had rewritten. |
| KindKong chapter 9 . 6/9 You should check the spelling of Pokemon in the chapters. |
| NobodyOwens5 chapter 2 . 4/12 I was a bit confused so I googled to check but the charmander line doesn't actually become black before evolving into a charizard. shiny charmander are more yellow gold coloured. otherwise a pretty nice intro, even if I'm not happy about him being deaged |
| User name is taken try again chapter 4 . 10/17/2019 There have been a couple of pretty big holes in your story and you seem to have some trouble grammatically with your word cases. I do not know if you are a younger writer or possibly have English as your second language but I have noticed numerous grammatical errors using angry instead of anger or Charmander instead of Charmanders'. It is little things like that which make a story hard to follow grammatically and difficult to continue reading. I would highly reccomend getting something like grammarly which is a free grammar checking app for google chrome to fix some of those errors. |
| Kenrio chapter 18 . 7/28/2019 Wow what a forced plot twist |
| Kenrio chapter 4 . 7/27/2019 So wil be the gay mc like the Canon |
| Zentari2238 chapter 2 . 7/23/2019 ... Really? ALMOST DIED TO A NET?! Are you for real? Oh and he also lost his memories. Yeah, this isn't a Bleach crossover, this is you inserting as a complete OOC 'Ichigo' with only the name being the same. |
| commandosquirrel chapter 20 . 7/21/2019 ichigo's a shit trainer compared to cynthia she'd wreck his team |
| OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 3 . 7/13/2019 Aside from his name, Ichigo has no memory of his past life. And he made a friend out of Charmander and the Ketchum family. |
| OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 2 . 7/13/2019 A shiny charmander. Even though it's a black charmander. |
| OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 Ichigo in the Pokemon world? Game on! |
| Bung3665 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 Really liked the story. All I have to say is please keep Caitlin in the harem, I know she is an annoying tsundere for most but I love the fact that you included her in the story. I look forward to the continuation of this story! |
| bleachfan46 chapter 50 . 7/6/2019 When is the sequel coming?! |
| bebepantheon chapter 50 . 6/19/2019 gruuuu...T_T i spent two days reading this and the last two chapters really made me cry! Will there be a time when Ichigo will be reunited with Charizard and Larvitar again? When will the next sequel be up? |
