Nope, it wilpl be an hour. 15 minutes is never enough time forany female to get ready

I thought you said her name waas Kaitlin. That's what you said before

Just curious, why do you use dashes instead of quotation marks? It kind of makes it hard for me to read, because it feels like the conversations are all thoughts, because that's how my sister writes thoughts as. I love the story though!

great chapter! it has amazing substance while also being sweet and fluffy as cotton candy! "actually it's peitro." oh, man. that line just captured his character perfectly. can't wait for more

I like where this is going and am excited to read more! You will get more reviews soon! it just takes a little time. Can't wait for an update!

Considering English is not your first language, you did really well! Loved the stormtrooper comment in chapter one! I look forward to reading more!