wow very nice! love it!

This was such an amazing story!

Love it very much _

Great writing and good story c:

As They always say behind a great man is even greater woman.
After everything they went through they still got thier happily ever after great job

wow, last 3 chapters were the best! loved it

Wow...this ending was intense and bittersweet! Nasu that crazy deranged bitch got exactly what she deserved! It was so rewarding to see Vegeta put an end to her! Poor Bulma really suffered a lot! I’m relieved that their family is living happily ever after despite all the traumatizing events that they’ve endured. This was an amazing journey! Enjoyed the ride! Btw...your story inspired me to read the book! Great Job! Looking forward to reading your next vegebul story! ;)

What a ride! You did an amazing job creating tension. I was on the edge of my seat! So glad everyone is safe and happy! *WHEW*

OMG what a trip. woof! what a crazy ass ride this is. I'm beyond relief this nightmare is finally over. holy crap! it was taking me to Anxiety Town reading about Nasu. I'm tired. LOL I'm glad it's over and everyone can just live their lives. I'm still kinda mad at Vegeta though because Bulma and Trunks lived in hell with Nasu around. both of them almost killed. I'm glad it's finished.

That was a great ending. I LOVED that Vegeta got to kill that bitch, Nasu. Now atleast they don't have a crazy bitch trying to get their son.

OMG already the final chapter next? I dunno what to feel. but i suspect only that bitch Nasu is the one who made the call. If she can't have Vegeta then no one will. Everyone is going to hell with her. I hate her. I hate her as much as I hate brussell sprouts and pinto beans. Can she just die already like horribly? I mean what good is she for at this point really? I am so worried for Trunks and Bulma. Vegeta, oh man, what is going to happen to you, you hot damn sexy piece of work?

So when is Vegeta going to realize its Nasu all along?

Omg I wonder who called the police? Oh wait I bet it was that bitch, Nasu. I hope that Vegeta finds out that it was her and that other lady in the infirmary that done that to Bulma. Update again soon

Damn what a crazy mess

Damn! Bulma's pregnant! Poor woman! She REALLY should have listened to Vegeta when he told her to STAY AWAY FROM THAT CRAZED HEIFER! Now she's pregnant AND in a coma. Poisoned by Nasu's followers in the hospital, no doubt.
I still can not believe the nerve of this trick! Did she REALLY just ask Vegeta how THEIR son was doing? For real?! I'm shocked Vegeta didn't put a bullet through her skull! Why hold back?
Everything seems to be falling down around Vegeta's head, it's enough to drive him insane! I mean, he's even go Goku stressing out now. Questioning his loyalty to him and all! Man, Vegeta, wife critically ill and pregnant, a crazy bitch stalking his family, assassins EVERYWHERE. How is a body supposed to stay within their right mind? Now the police is invading the organization in a women and child abuse allegation! I guess it's no surprise who is behind that! Nasu's is sick enough to convince her followers that Vegeta and his men are holding the women against they're will, and keeping them from their children (keeping her from Trunks)! Damn I can't stand it! I'm on the edge of my seat now!

B reading U!