That was a cute little story. I loved it

Is J you?

Good one

Awesome I love nightmare reality and speechless and now this

this was afu read I really liked this stoyr

I just had an interesting thought, I know you probably already have these chapters mapped out. However, what if you have a chapter for each one of the girls one possibly for Theodore and Simon for taking care of Alvin. Although it make it awkward after or towards the end of the story if you had do you and Simon take her about maybe Dave taking care of Alvin? So far nice story looking forward to the next chapters even if they're short they are some good chapter still great job.

Not bad

good i like it

I love the bond between Alvin and J knowing those two are very close indeed. I think that part that Alvin got slightly teething problem knowing you baby got teething problem that's for short. Excellent story you created. I love how Alvin love Talking Teddy show, well apart from he hate it. But his baby mind made him love it. Excellent story you create.

Very well done also very cute there was a typo though you said "the entered the room" when it "they entered the room" also J being in love with Miles was no surprise to me I suspected that when I read about the party of her wanting a boyfriend. Can I suggest a story what if each version of the Chipmunk crew came together through J portal to either solve a big problem or have fun do what you will with that like with what DC or Marvel does with their comics. I've seen people make hilarious dialogue with those kind of things in YouTube comments.

If Alvin mind is split between half teenage plus half baby would he might would say a curse word j hears it would j talks to him about not saying words like that when he stay stuck in a baby body would she even though he a teenage stuck in a baby body?

Has J ever meet their 60s version of them before since she didn't state that she did

Pretty good, though you have a few typos. "Herro" instead of "hello", and 'who' instead of 'whole' and 'and am' instead of 'am I'. Hope that helps! And are you still going to do the usual Munkcast, or was the story in place of that? I could help you with lack of questions. I've always wondered whether or not they remembered their parents? Chipmunks mothers do care for their children until they can fend for themselves, after which they might go off on their own,or build a nest with her, depending on the season. Anyhow hope this helps, and Peace!

I have to say that Alvin is really cute as a baby. I bet that J would be a pound carer to look after Alvin while Simon created a potion to him. Excellent story you created it. 10/10. J good luck to raise Alvin.

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