I"M GOING TO HUMP BANG YOU ALOT OH FUCK YEAH YOU BETTER CUM FROM YOUR PUSSY.

This is AWESOME

AAAAAA

BEST STORY FOREVER!

I love this fanfic and wish you can continue since their aren't many stories like these but I can u understand if you won't but keep doing your best uwu I loved this so thank you for making it.

Damn, this story's a bit old now, but I'm really enjoying all these fluffy little stories I found! It'll help keep me sated as I wait for more "Never Say Never".

Also, yes, this NEEDS to be canon! They're so freaking cute! And the others are awesome too! Celeste and Trust Fund aren't totally dicks! There's a quick dash for my LeoSaya needs! So cute!

This is an excellent story! I loved it!

The feels are real

GOD DAMN IT! I realized I wasn't signed in when I left my last comment! Oh well, just to let you know I'm the guest that left the recent comment a minute ago :P

I couldn't help laughing and squealing so much! (So much that I hurt my side from holding my pillow to my face as I curled and unfurled on my side lol) when they were intimate! EEEEEEE! *screams into pillow, curling on my side than pulls side muscle again* AHHH!

I want a sequel, the reactions from certain characters would be nice~

Wow, this story was amazing, the smut came out of left field but it wasn't... unwanted. Regardless, I loved this stoey. I didn't even realize it was you until you pulled out the "beautiful readers" that you always do at the end.

Anyways, the most favorite part of this story for me was how you handled Kirigiri's emotions. I feel like that's what a lot of fic writers mess up on and executed it perfectly on how her iron mask cracks during a life-threatening situation. I'd definitely like to see your take on how she would handle her emotions peeking from behind her maks when she's around Makoto during happier times or during times of a blossoming love forming between them.

If this is how Naegiri is done from you, I can't wait to see more , especially if it shows up in "Never Say Never." Pretty much gonna ship it until I die, regardless of what happens in DR3 Future.

And that is how two people save the lives of their friends. Too bad they couldn't save the rest of the world.

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Then again, they couldn't have stopped the riots even if they wanted to. That is... unless they were time travelers.

But nevertheless, I love the way you developed Makoto and Kyoko's relationship from classmates to lovers and to that, I down a liter of Pepsi in admiration.

Well... I guess it's time for to hit the dusty old trail. This Mellow Dias had real life stuff that needs to be attended too, among other things. Cheers!

Great story! There aren't nearly enough Makoto x Kyoko fics around so this really hit the spot. What I really like about their realtionship is how well they work off each other. With Makoto being the emotional part and her being the logical one. Kyoko spends most of the first game incapable of trusting anyone, with her scared hands covered by her gloves being the symbol of that. But because Makoto is so genuine and an open book, it allows her to open up to him and establish relationships that she hadn't been able to make due to her father's abandonment and the incident with her hands. You did a really good job capturing this here and I'd like to see more!

This is honestly so beautiful i love you for this. thank you for this i want to hug you!

Make a sequel? How about making a AU of the game/anime, but where the despair twin are NOT the despair twins but are normal ultimates and the riot reserved course is the mastermind or something. Of course it also being a naegiri fic, OR make it where they survive waves of reserved course attacks? Idk...
- Anubis

This is just...too perfect