I like your version of events much better. Ash is an adorable Mew, and I didn't find One, Dragoness' version, to be very believable. Maybe it's just my aversion to reset buttons. If a story ends with things just the same as they were, then the story had no purpose. I will be watching for more of this, I think.

um interesting

you certainly did your research on dracula ive never heard of him being named tepes(but to be fair i'm not that much of a fan sry). 9/10 pls continue. and if you have tell what the sequels name is.

Great work, i hope to see more

That was pretty cool! I've never seen fanfiction of fanfiction before! I liked all of the Russian stuff, I've never seen anything like this before! And a very good FFOFF (fanfiction of fanfiction)!

I would have reviewed every single chapter, but I jsut couldn't wait to read more! Excellent story! It'samazing how you seem to tie Dracula in with all your stories, and do it so wonderfully too! Keep on writing! YOur an awesome writer!

So Ho-Oh's chosen one is next. I wonder who SHE is. (it will be a she, since Ho-Oh is a she too, ) I hope the next part is better than this one. You oblvious put detail and time into this, but I just felt it didn't have the same, high paced drama Dragoness' stories have.

Now it's finnaly getting intresting, but Ashura didn't think of himself as evil, he thought he was doing the right thing from the begining to end.

I have to be honesty. It's bland and doesn't hold my intrest.

I really enjoyed your story, and the whole idea behind it. An Ash who saves the world is kinda a favourite of mine

I'm looking forward to more of your series, so now I've got another name to daily check on when I log on

I'm sorry for not writing a review earlier, but I like to read a complete fic first before saying wheather I liked or disliked a story.

Way cool! I love it!

continue continue continue, its a good story

This was really good.

That is soo cool. DIe Ashura DIE! ::repeatedly bashes Ashura over the head with a mallet::