It's a Windi day out there...

Sorry. I had to. I like the chapter! Andi's really coming along in her development!

She named a zombie after Apollo. Before ToA even happened. Is she a Seer or something? Or did Zeus just like the name? Lol, I liked the chapter.

Awesome

Ok, you know that aggravated review I left on the previous story of this set? Nix it. I can see how you used Riordan's work to build a basis for a bridge between the to universes. Far better done than any of the others that try to do this, seriously that last one I read got to book 5 and had literally changed nothing. They lost the character of the...character..they added instead, where you basically just used the potter verse without harry, made an original character for that spot harry would leave and invented something that to me, feels better. By the time I'd gotten to this story, I've read hundreds of rehashing the same thing, again changing little and it left me rather irritated and for this, I apologize for my last review of your story. Also, this is the first child of Zeus someone actually used well. But then, I kinda stick to hp and naruto/pjo stories (sun's heir, deaths guardian is best so far for the naru/pjo imo). While I'm not a great fan of gwl stories, I gotta say i like this one. Andi feels real, and you can see how shes developing both as a demigod and as a witch- sorry, magical girl. The interactions in this story do feel a lot more natural in book 2 than they did in book 1, the idea that not all the gods will love someone immediately needs to be explored more by other authors (seriously, naruto automatically being loved by 3 Greek demis, 8 roman, 6 mortals and 5 goddesses, including Artemis who hates most men, for example? Lame. No romance, no character development, no plot. Just some horny high schooler's wet dream. But, say naruto slowly befriending Artemis (only) and slowly building up a rapport with her until she realizes she cant live without him around and that she has fallen in love? Something like that is how it feels between your Will and Andi and I love it.) Again, I apologize if my last review insulted you, please dont take me as one of those trolls who flame for flame's sake, I just saw it as yet another rehash of a story that's been told too many times.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

I really think you are being WAY TO HARD on andromeda I mean come on I love the story but the way you treat her as if she just a messy person who can't get anything done.
I'm just saying put yourself in her shoes
Or give her more credit then you our doing.

As someone with ADHD i have to say she's twice as bad as i was as a kid...

Im sorry Andi...the cake is a Lie.

andi is basically a walking nuclear button with 100 warns saying push at own risk. then some idiot(s) go through all that trouble and dies. yes you could blame the nuke but at some point the world must accept natural selection

i have to say that one of the things i liked most about andi was her devotion and longing for a sister and the way you ended up doing her... oof. then the struggling to have her attention and finally this. yeah i think thalia was 100% at fault. yes andi came on too strong but literally everything else? nope not buying the both at fault bit.

also this is the second time thalia is unlikable in your stories, do you not like her or do i have nostalgia glasses in regards to her?

Well done. BRAVO!
Thank you for a most interesting and enjoyable ride.
I especially liked the mind twist at the end.
VERY WELL DONE!

I find it interesting reading the constructs of your imagination.
Digory dying in the first task, and no remorse from the peanut gallery.
Saves thinking about a lot of character dust bunnies.
Serius still dies but Moony is a basket case.
I'm looking forward to reading the last chapter of this story.
LIVE LONG AND PROSPER!

I just can’t finish this chapter. I just can’t. I know you haven’t updated this story in over a year but I have to throw in my two cents. I loved the first book and I’m glad you made Andi flawed but this chapter rubs against every part of me the wrong way. THEY KNEW her fatal flaw is recognition, THEY KNEW! But Chiron and Annabeth are treating her like she’s being deliberately malicious. She’s being nice to tantalus because he is actually sympathizing with her. When you know some one has self esteem issues you DONT treat them
The way Andi has been treated this chapter. The way you wrote Andi was that she truly didn’t understand why people being hurt was a bad thing, and I can see it from her point of view, good job there, but then you have all of these people around her pushing at her with no one actually listening to her or trying to TRULY explain why she should care. When you have potions that can heal almost anything and godly food that brings people back from the brink of death, I can see why it would be hard to sympathize. The thing that truly got me though was andi’s conversation with Annabeth. Annabeth is supposed to be her friend but when Andi calls herself dumb, Annabeth just goes in for the “I told you so” moment and when Andi try’s to explain there is no actual listening going on. I just couldn’t go on, flawed characters are great but when you have them bawling to their friends with no genuine emotion on annabeths part, whose supposed to care for her. No, that’s where I stop, now it’s just becoming character abuse, which annabeths supposed to hate.

I wonder if in part 3 if Andi will encounter something that will require her to overcome her fear that she gained from from her encounter with Scylla.

After all the TWT stuff is done, will we be done dealing with Hogwarts?

You misspelled try and from in this sentence: , so I'll just have to ty my best to make amends form here on out."