Reviews for Loud Gravity
Bloodyninja88 chapter 20 . 7/17
This was a pretty good chapter overall, i liked Kassandra's character, though i don't remember Succubi being from Greek myth, but i could be wrong (i recently found out about a origin to Werewolves in Greek myth) that said the singing power of hers kind of made me think of a siren a bit.

I also have to say that i like that Leni was able to enter a employ exchange program for the summer since otherwise the new job might of caused problems for her job. Though Stan making her work at the shack too is a bit much but at least she is making more money now though.

Also yeah i caught on to Mirajane being similar to her Fairy Tail counterpart, in truth she kind of feels like a mix of her teenage personality and with a little of her adult selves kindness. Leni's other co-worker kind of made me think of Cody from TDI though it probably is just the name.

P. S. : I feel the need to mention this but in Greek myth zeus did have a large number of kids (i think about 10) with the Queen Lamia, its just hera got jealous and cursed the Queen into a monster that killed and ate most of her children. . . except her daughter scylla, she was latter turned into a sea monster by a witch.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/15
How is work on Boss Mabel going, dude?
whateverman53 chapter 8 . 7/1
You forgot the nose bleed.
Guest chapter 20 . 6/30
I get it you have a life outside of fanfic nothing to apologise for
OMAC001 chapter 20 . 6/28
Interesting episode. Feels less...action packed then normal but still with mystery.
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 20 . 6/28
Nice to see this story active again and with an original chapter as well. Not bad. Also, who is Brock?
Gamelover41592 chapter 20 . 6/28
excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :)
Shadow Joestar chapter 20 . 6/28
KO awesome chapter, well that was interesting seeing Leni has made her a new friend with a monster from Greek and she is immune to the singing which means she will have to keep an eye on her while still having fun.
Starlord Master chapter 20 . 6/28
Leni needs to get her hearing checked.

Happy June!
Guest chapter 20 . 6/28
That was an awesome chapter, I am really excited for Boss Mabel, Bottomless Pit, Deep End, Carpe Diem, Land Before Swine and the final battle between Gideon and Bill in Dreamscapers and Gideon Rises. I also can't wait for the kids to meet their Great Uncle Stanford/Ford a.k.a the Author of the Three Journals.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/21
Hows this story coming along? Its been a whole month.
The guest chapter 1 . 5/12
Finally a new chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12
Yaaaay
TheWriter946 chapter 19 . 5/12
An Update!
Guest chapter 19 . 5/12
Can you please do Boss Mabel, Bottomless Pit, Deep End, Carpe Diem, Land Before Time, Dreamscaperes and Gideon Rises to finish up Season 1?
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