Love Jack in action stories! Especially since the show wrote him out.

Loved this! Character and dialogue were perfect!

Ahh, that was so fantastic!

Brilliant. So different from the standard fare. Great job, and love that it was driven by the bechdel test

Very nice story. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Absolutely true to the characters, well done.

Very well written An enjoyable short story.

Old jack characterization 10/10 felt like it could have been an actual episode

Great story, it was a pleasure to read it!

Brilliant! Loved it.

Excellent. Really enjoyed that. (Poor Jack)

I'm a bit late to the party as I have only just discovered this - but I just have to say how much I enjoyed this. A really nice story on what it means to be part of the SG1 team. Loved it. Hope you keep writing - I for one will keep reading!

Can't believe I missed this...excellent story. You write sg1 so well...even if they are not there! I truly have enjoyed all your stories over the years...you really are a talented writer. Thanks for many hours of enjoyment. Hope you write more when the muse strikes...

Just found this little gem - thanks so much for a great read. Have been a fan of your writing and was so happy to see a new story from you - I love your writing, particularly how you portray Jack. Hope that you continue to write SG1.

Welcome back and thanks for quenching my thirst for Stargate stories! What I enjoy the most is your consistent portrayal of Jack throughout your stories. More specifically, the Jacks of String Theory, for instance, and a Hard Day's Night share the same character/personality yet you are able to convey how the former Jack has matured into this later Jack. Even in the tragically damaged and seemingly reckless Jack in Down Here Among the Wreckage, the essential character is evident. What I'm trying to say is you write brilliantly.

Delightful tale. Well done.