I don’t buy it. He snapped once, why couldn’t he do it again when something that was significantly more twisted was happening? Granted, it wouldn’t have really changed anything, but the Harry you started the story with would’ve told them all to go fuck themselves as they were no better than Voldemort now.

You’re claiming literally every person that was killed by Death Eaters was also raped.. no doubt to make it seem more evil, but it’s just made it ridiculous.

Good chapter i home you wipe out all the dark familys

So. The good guys are now bloodthirsty, the bad guys are asking for compassion, and Harry has been assigned two murderous incest kids to rape, who have probably already been raped by their father/brother. Yuck. His first instincts, to get out of Dodge were probably correct. To put my Slytherin hat, its probably a trick for him to father some kids who might be immune to the killing curse. But I'm cynical.

Good smut and enjoyable. Would love it as a full story.

And so they adapt to this rather peculiar situation. I have to wonder how any witch who really is interested in Harry, as Harry not as something else, will take this additional complication. I most certainly hope said witch is open to females as well as males as I can see his 'slaves' wanting to pleasure her as much as they want to pleasure him. Which leads to the thought of them putting on a show of pleasuring each other to quite inflame his arousal.

I really like the story so far, mostly because it shows how even good people could do horrible things. I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry navigates the world now that he's seeing that even people on the other side have families and loved ones. The way they blatantly threatened Narcissa without consequence and her reaction was actually very well done. It shows how the seeds of all out civil war are being planted due to both sides' actions and attitudes toward each other.

Great extra scene, though I still would have liked if this was turned into a full story and not just a short one.

A good chapter and thanks for the rare pairing.

good short story, although I would have liked to see more of it, since this is a very rare pairing, and it is happening in interesting circunstances to boot.

I honestly have no idea why you wrote this trash. It isn't even sexual in a way to qualify as some sort of fetishistic writing. It's just Perfect Lionheart levels of appalling. It's the writing of the Marquis de Sade minus any redeeming features.

This is rather interesting direction to take a fic. I first saw it on HPF but since you have other stuff here... any chance you'll continue this fic? I'm indifrernt if it's more smut but more of this new version of the HPU you made would be great. (smuts always a win but the topic is so intersting...)

Love it! I really think you could make this into a full fledged story as your writing skills are obviously good enough.

Thanks for this chapter and story I really liked the rare pairing.

This was good and a very interesting chapter. Harry endures a great deal and never gets to really vent or speak his mind. I am glad he got the chance.

"It is your right, Harry. After the threat of Voldemort is . . . settled." this line sums up how much Dumbledore and the magical world care for Harry they view him as a weapon or figurehead.

While horrible it was good to get insight into what Death Eaters did, why things went the way they did after the first war, the lack of justice and why Riddle was so feared. As that is never explained in the books and there would be great resentment and anger directed at the Ministry and the dark families.

Well said about Harry being the match as too often it seems he is blamed for what goes wrong in the magical world like Sirius was.

The fury of the light families and how they acted when they had the power to seek revenge was inevitable and well done. Civil war would be the biggest issue after the first and second war.

I liked mention of the Gaunt family as I think being a Gaunt would be a major taboo for the Dark Lord worse than being half blood or even the result of a love potion.