Hmmm.

I legit was thinking to myself half way thru winter was a cradle snatcher or whatever you called this

Wow i am glad I found this keep up the good work

Yay! Another update! :D

"Ruby screaming my name" ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡ ). HEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHE

Do be sure to wash that blood off, Kaiden.

I patiently await the next awesome chapter!

Voy a hacer una review en general. Me gustaba el otro libro, aunque entiendo tus razones de subir los capitulos en este fic.

Con respeto a los capitulos subidos hasta el momento, es fascinante volver a leer los altos y bajos de Kaiden pre-encuentro con los demas (Pd: sigo esperando ver mas de Dark Kaiden y una revancha contra Raven).

Algo que tambien he notado es que ya no se repiten tantos parrafos (en el otro fic pasaba que se repetia una oracion/parrafo y dificultaba un poco la lectura) culpo al sitio y no al escritor.

Seguire esperando mas actualizaciones de este y el otro fic.

Pd: SPOILER Kai la vas a tener jodida mas adelante. Disfruta el viaje xD

Damn...

I kinda saw him meeting Muramasa later, dead or not, coming from a mile away.

Damn...
You write a damn good mental break, though.

Perhaps churning them out so quickly is not such a great idea. Take your time. Work through them. Release a chapter once a week at the most.

A fan of your hard work-
Gizmo

There's no war this side of the Ba Sing Sei

I like the Grandmother already. I think Nora would too.

Ok, so, one thing I have noticed in more recent chapters is a drop in quality. Perhaps reading over it a couple times and editing it before posting might help with this. A rushed thing is always bad, while time taken is eventually good.

That aside, I am still enjoying the story itself! Take your time when writing. It helps to make it much easier to read.

Until next chapter!

So are these chapters before the second volume of your story, like what he did for the 2-3 months in mistral. Or bloopers from here and there in the timeline

Yay! We found Grandma!