| Reviews for Okay |
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   BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 What a sad story and I can see this happening too. I always wondered why Leo would visit with Splinter but never Karai. You did great with the banter and the ease with which they talked. Nicely done on this. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| DeployJustice chapter 1 . 9/22/2016 Beautiful, the style of the writing really pulls and tugs at the heart string. Definitely going to give this a few reada. |
| Snowfun chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 Amazing! I really liked the twist at the end where it only turned out to be a hologram instead of Karai. |
| Raekwon The Genius chapter 1 . 9/3/2016 Hello there, I was searching for some lovely LeoRai and I came across you're story, it delivered very much and well. This had all the classic elements of a lovely LeoRai story; sparing, banter and an uniqueness that only Karai a and Leonardo can display. Like ice and water met lighting and fire, a very fierce yet beautiful showcase. But the end was heartbreaking in a gorgeous, when it was just a hologram. But Leo still can't find peace, solace and love in it, a beautiful tragedy indeed. I hope to see more LeoRai stories from you, cause this one was so gorgeously awesome PEACE AND LOVE. |
| nodelinquent chapter 1 . 9/2/2016 djskfjdkfl THIS WAS SO GOOOD! I loved your writing and ah, this concept always kills me and you did it SO WELL! |
| Mariner12 chapter 1 . 9/2/2016 Lovely story! I was totally caught by surprise when I realized it was a hologram. I actually had to go back a paragraph and re-read it just to make sure that was what was actually happening! Ugh, my heart. /3 Good job. |
| Guest Reviewer chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Fantastic story! One small nitpicky correction: The 5 famous NYC neighborhoods (Queens, the Bronx, Manhattan, Brooklyn and Staten Island) are spelled "boroughs", not "burrows". |
| 5Mississippis chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Tremendous story, inctedibly written! Your reveal that Leo wss in a hologram and not NYC was absolutely heartbreaking! Fantastic work! |
| icys chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 The ending is so sad... Even in hologram he still can't do it. Beautiful piece :). |
| Nosedivefan01 chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Holy crap! I'm super hooked and excited to see where you take this! Please keep going! |
| SupernalGodzilla chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Heart... Breaking... so... beautiful... LEORAI FOREVER! (Starts crying a river) |
| Firebird Scratches chapter 1 . 8/30/2016 Oh my gawaawawwwwwddddduh. That ending! I love this to teeny tiny pieces. Great job, you! |
| VanessaCorduroy chapter 1 . 8/30/2016 This was so beautiful! I audibly gasped when I realized Leo was only using the hologram. |
