Keep it up!

Do not take this the wrong way but now the story begins for me. It's all good but I felt that the whole Omega arc was unneeded and didn't fit with the theme of the story.

Hope that they meet soon.

Great story and I hope you finish it. These kind of stories are the best kind of Mass effect stories. Unfortunately they are the kind that only rake in a lot of reviews over time when they are completed.

Oh my... the drama ;)

This fic is a tad slow but I believe it to be a hidden gem.

Ah! The moment of realization is almost upon us!

Oh boy! It's getting good!

Brilliant concept!

Ooh, great story so far. I like the slow build of their relationship. Definitely curious where you will take this pairing. I hope he doesn't ever give away her secret.

finally the sister got her comeuppance, she earned it.

money is on the sister being Cerberus or add least corrupt

This story is good. Really, really good.
You had me hooked that I ended up binge reading the whole thing.
The plot has been very refreshing and intriguing. I appreciate that the characters haven't been rushed and there seems to be non stop action. I am interested to see how you will bring these two together from such a harsh and fearful beginning.
Definitely, looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing your story!

please tell me you're not going to take two years for these two to admit their feelings for each other.

Those two chapters were a pleasant surprise, totally made my day or even my week! Again, I like the story's development. The connection to a mysterious crime involving her sister, just another wonderful layer to a deep and troubled relationship. Thank you very much!