i didn't wanted tó read this at first but im really glad I did. itt was really good, good job

I am not a native speaker, but almost at that level. I would be willing to correct most of the mistakes in this story as I really like it. Let me know if you would like me to do so.

...this looks good but i feel appalled at the spelling. i'll ust try and power through. please get a beta.

The story is nice but impossible to read. So full of grammatival errors, wrong verbs. A pity really. You should get someone to crossread it.

Poor Mycroft. Gosh damnit Sherlock! Treat your brother better.

Oh! Poor John! So worried, waited so long to see his friend safe...

I'm planning on following this story when I sign in, but warning. I'm not a consistent reviewer.

I need more of this fic, please. It is such an interesting au. Could you show us Sherlocks reaction to Readbeard's being gone?