Man, I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews because I'm super invested in this story! I see it's been a year since the last update so another one is probably unlikely, but I'd love to read the rest of this! Awesome job and thanks!

Ahhh I freaking love this story! It's so intriguing and really pulls you in! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was a really interesting chapter! Poor Keith, I can totally see where he's coming from.

I really like this story! There is so much emotion and I love it. Pls update when you can!

you're killing me here. You're breaking my heart here. Crazy. Awesome. Well paced. Can't tear myself away from this. Poor Keith. I just want someone to give him a nice long hug

Gosh what's going on?! You really know how create suspense!

This is really well written. I'm interested to see where you take this

I only just noticed the use of they/them pronouns for Pidge! Awesome!

Anyway, I am really enjoying this! Thank you so much for writing this - it's freaking awesome. I'm glad plan b didn't go ahead!

I am scared for plan b. But at least it's not Plan Bee. (Gods, it's a horrible film).

Anyway, this was a surprisingly cute chapter! Not nearly as angsty as the others, which I like!

Nope, nope, this is too angst for my soul. I hate it. God, please no. Why do I do this to myself...

Pidge is me at this point. I... I am gonna stop reading, and come back to this tomorrow, because I am emotionally screwed up at the moment. Um... I dunno why I'm even typing this...

Anyway, I want you to know that how ever many times I scream that I hate this, it means that I like it. So keep up the good work!

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOPE NOPE NO! I don't like this. Keith can't be dying, that's... It's so unfair - he's so young. He has his whole life ahead of him. His entire life has been burden after burden - he deserves a motherfucking break! No!

This is hella intense! I am gonna binge read all of this.

I am so curious about Keith and Shiro - this is really unlike them!

Whoa this is really intense! I'm on the edge of my (metaphorical) seat! Being past midnight hasn't left me much thought that doesn't end in some kind of exclamation, so I'll shut up before I start spouting garbage. This is great so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Could you please explain what the illness is? cause I'm really confused...I googled it, and it doesn't seem to match up. lol good job though. Great story, I'm just in need of a solid explaination

So, while I like the plot for the story, it felt things were revealed to fast to Lance, but also... when I look up dysmorthermia, what I get in my google searches are mental disorders, not physical disorders. Shiro also doesn't seem like the type to run away from such a thing either.