| Reviews for Missing Pieces |
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  Sarah chapter 1 . 3/12 What!?is that it?noooooooòooooooooooo |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2018 Damn it I’m crying This is beautiful |
 5redroses chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 I loved how it turned out. Just a style point: In the UK we don't call other people's parents 'sir'. If you're being formal, you'll call them 'Mr...', but otherwise we just use first names. |
| scorbus always chapter 1 . 7/2/2017 Poor Scorpius :( I liked the happy ending though |
| kateengland2002 chapter 1 . 6/17/2017 I love this story it's basically how my parents reacted to me being bi! |
| pen-for-sword chapter 1 . 6/13/2017 I gotta admit, I cried a bit in the end. It's hard enough being queer, but having a parent who is unsupportive makes it a lot worse. Reading about how Draco came around in the end touched me deeply. Thanks for sharing this. |
| MalfoysMuggleMrs chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 OMG ! I adored every second of thisYou did a really fantastic job with the characters. Draco's reaction was exactly how i'd anticipate it would be. Keep up the awesome work. |
| mayeevee chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 Oh my gosh please make a second one of this. And thank kami you actually made Draco nice in this story, everyone always makes him out to be mean in Albus x Scorpius fanfics even tho in the 8th book he seems to really care about only his son's happiness. Please make another one, I really do enjoy these |
| JackThunderbear42 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 This is lovely. You have a remarkable talent for dialogue, and make the Scorbus ship such a believable pairing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you! I had a few questions: 1) Wouldn't Draco Malfoy have house elves to prepare dinner (at eight) rather than supper (at five)? Draco preparing food rang slightly false for me. (Whereas the Potters doing so did not.) Also, I think Draco would have a monogrammed handkerchief to wipe his son's tears rather than a tissue. But, as I said, these are quibbles. I only bring them up because I think you are a fine enough writer to care about all the details. Keep writing more Scorbus! :) |
| seorii chapter 1 . 10/7/2016 I love this story so much, you are really talented! Are you going to continue this series? I really hope you will because oh my god |
| magicanimegurl chapter 1 . 9/9/2016 Its a start for draco but it better then destroying their slim father son relationship. Good Job. Write on |
| Tonsoffandoms chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 I have been blessed by the this story |
| Bellatrix394 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016 Oh by gosh. I love this so much can't wait for more! |
| annabethfan15 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016 It was emotional and so cute! You really write well and I loved this story so much! |
| my1alias chapter 1 . 9/1/2016 Aww! OMG I love this so much! |
