Dear MoonlightStartlight,
This is a very nice story you have written. The plot is charming and funny, well done. Your character interactions are on point. I can clearly see each brother's character showing though the dialog. However, I would recommend you do a little bit more explaining of the character's motivations and reactions. Why would it make sense for Sam and Mathew to have a dance off to settle their dispute? Why would Mathew by a pair of shoes instead of alternative methods of gaining height, like stilts or a tall hat? Why would Sam agree to show off his demon form so easily? What would make Sam cry over watching the animation? I'm sure you have a reason, and if you don't you have the ability to create one. Yet as a reader, I don't really know. I would like to. Anyways, good job on your story. Best of luck on your future writing.
Catcateightyeight

This is amazing! Are you planning to continue this?

So funny! I loved it! You are a really good writer if this story is done then please make more!

I loved this soooo much it wasn't romantic more like a slice of life kinda thing, oh how I wish the boys were real

This was so funny u should make more