This was awesome

Great one-shot. Really enjoyed it.

Typical. I'm a year and half late. You likely won't even read this, Miss .before. but whole i can still review...HOLY SHIT WHAT A FUCKING AMAZING STORY WHAT THE FUUUKC. Oh my fucking lord this Eleven personified (yes it's no the right use of the word) perfectly, I fucking love it. Season One vibes for days this is perfect. Mileven on point, Elevens perspective is fucking godly for Season One:
"she wasn't even sorry because how dare you touch him you mouth-breather".
Also love how you hunt at her perspective of the rest of the story, like this is a continuous though process, most authors can't do that. Beautiful, thank you so much.
:)

God how cute
that's true
Thanks for the Fic

Great story! It reminds me of March 25, 2017 and the way an old friend from back in 1981 must have felt when I let trust issues escape for a moment that were a lot like the ones of her own that she was also trying to suppress since we were re-introduced on September 7, 2016 and heard each other's full first and last names for the first time in the 35 years since we were just two kids hanging out with some friends in a small neighborhood where we were each visiting some relatives like we always did on the weekends when the weather was nice enough for playing outside. It wasn't that what either of us said was particularly harsh. What made us both pull away from each other was, instead, the way hurt resembled anger. One of only four women I've ever met in more than 40 years since noticing & being noticed by girls for the first time who made me feel the way Mike felt sitting there with El waiting for Dustin to find the secret stash of pudding. Of the four, there were two, I would have married if their families hadn't moved away, and one who actually was my wife for a time until she died in her sleep in our bed almost 15 years ago. This one, though, being someone I technically met before any of the others, very easily could have been my first love. We still talk sometimes, but it's been awkward lately.

AWWWGHHH!

The way eleven thinks was spot on, good job!

Book good, me likes it it have yay moments and say wwwhhhhhaaatt moments and is really good of books
That have to do
With books and stuff I enjoy 11/11

It wasn't as good as your other 2,but I still liked it. 4.5 stars.

I liked this fan fiction. The main reason I liked it was because it was descriptive, and focused more on feelings than events. That is about all I have to say about this, but what you said about you liking reviews convinced me to write one.

Love this! Write more!

its Claire again! love it love all your work

please continue!

*moment when there totally should be a waffle emoji*

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Wow! This is great! I'm obsessed with Eleven too. And I Love her love of eggos, lol. This is a rather great story, and I think you got El's feelings perfectly.