Reviews for Of Familiy Mafia and Magic - Has been adopted by DaughterofDuck |
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917brat chapter 3 . 11/11/2019 this is a truly interesting story that I would love to read more of and so hope that you update again soon because I can't wait to see just what you are going to have happen next. |
Ndy chapter 3 . 10/8/2019 Wuahhhh... |
SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 7/24/2019 so good |
Bri chapter 3 . 5/3/2019 Noooooooooooooooo gimme more adorable purple Harry! |
Silvyrfox chapter 3 . 4/23/2019 I look forward to your next chapter |
Wika0304 chapter 3 . 4/15/2019 Please update, I love it |
anja.nollmann.9 chapter 3 . 4/9/2019 Please Keep writing, but get a person to proof read. I would do it if you want. |
Mumia0813 chapter 3 . 4/8/2019 more! |
prismaticmem chapter 3 . 4/7/2019 I love this story. Your spelling mistakes make the story more amusing for me to read. I stink at spelling and I'm a native English writer. Autocorrect keeps most of my mistakes hidden but grammar is a myth to me. Please continue this story. |
killianariel18100 chapter 3 . 4/1/2019 What happen to ch.4 |
freefall-gypsy chapter 3 . 4/1/2019 you spelled some words wrong or used the wrong word I can help you with the spelling in this chapter, though I am not a beta reader(I can't do grammar things,) also great job on the plot I look forward to more. so here is a list: Noting Nothing (only missed one letter out) wich which reasons (should be reason) Whiteout without (two different words) Literary literally (two different words) understate underestimate follow Fellow Season session occlumency (you spelt it right the first time but accidentally used an N instead of an M the second time,) Little (the sentence would flow better if you used the word small fortune instead of Little fortune) ware were played payed Lilly Lily stake streak in into quest(s) guest(s) (you used a Q instead of a G) Live life neither either (you had a double negative otherwise the word would have worked) cuu cue sends sent ne be dead eater Death-Eater treaded treated image imagine braking breaking ge he woha whoa want wand Case cease Fierwhiskey firewhiskey to too (only some of them) full fully in ha into a Patfoot Padfoot OCC OoC that is the list. oh and : ABCDEFGH...I...love...this...Story, |
xiu chapter 4 . 3/4/2019 i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this fic is amazing, wonderfull i hope you continue, and that we can read a new chapter soon, please? |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2019 Welp you need to proofread cause I see a lot of spelling mistakes. And its irritating. Otherwise good job |
Anariel Phoenix Blade chapter 4 . 3/4/2019 Well I’m American or I’d so try to help but something tells me it wouldn’t do any good. America and Americans tend to be among the most hated people in the world at the moment ( Thanks to our own a*holes andidiots in charge). Sadly we haven’t even managed to get him where he belongs yet and are losing more and more rights, clean resources and seemingly brain cells the longer he and his Ilk are in office. I really hope you get enough people to help save the internet. |
hnh058513 chapter 3 . 3/4/2019 Also Dumbledore could be charged with attempt to destroy evidence |