Talk about intense. Pretty in-character too. And Matt jumps at the opportunity to fanboy and convert new fans.

I think maybe this could have been arranged chronologically, starting with Sam being taken and then Shiro and Matt being brought to the strange cell.

A couple typos: an H was missing from "is soul was his own"; "loose consciousness" should be "lose consciousness"; the phrase "as if it/they were on fire" was used twice in one paragraph; an "as it come up" should be "as it came up".

I am reading this as a flashback, cue insert where the A/N is. Lol. This is amazing.

YES. FIREFLY REFERENCES FTW! Love the fic and I will be reading the others as soon as I can keep writing!

Awesome story : )

Hi I hope I didn't influence your story too much bad or good about how in the original Shiro/Sven died. The trailer for the second season looks awesome and heartbreaking. I don't want Shiro to die because next to Keith, he's my favorite

So, I think the first thing that jumped out at me is the fact Matt is bumping his head against the ceiling. From what we've seen in the series, Matt's somewhere between a foot to a foot and a half shorter than Shiro, so Shiro would need to be really tall for a five foot ceiling to be a problem, not to mention the fact the dimensions given really aren't that small, and still leave room to stretch, although not in an easy manner.

I really liked the story, but I did have to read over the story twice to figure out what was going on.

this is good!