I really like how you reversed the NaLu ship label into "Luna". A true stroke of genius. I didn't even see that until now.

I love the stories... one shot and related and sweet...

Hey Stele. So I finally read this amazing fan fic of yours and am now all caught up. One thing that has been bugging me since the beginning: the timeline. Is it safe to assume that the events, or at least some of events, of Tenrou Island didn't happen in this as the story starts off in the year 788? Meaning that they were NOT trapped on Tenrou for 7 years as a result of Fairy Sphere activating to protect them from Acnologia? Now as far as putting a date at the beginning of the chapters, brilliant idea. It gives the readers a sense of time. But given that you have deviated so far from canon it is a bit confusing, at least to me anyways. And speaking of the canon; Hiro Mashima just needs to give up the rights to someone who can do a better job of telling the story than he can at this point. The last dozen or so chapters have been absolute CRAP all because he is trying to rush through to reach the ultimate climactic conclusion of the story. He built up all this hype about the Spriggan 12, and then turned them completely LAME. I seem to recall in some Chapter Opening A/N's of one of Grizzly's stories the two of you were on a mission to take control of Fairy Tail away from Hiro Mashima- sorry that it didn't work out btw. Sorry. :( I kinda went off on a tangent there. But Mashima is really starting to piss me off with the way that he is doing things. :( Anywhoser, this is a really great story that you have come up with Stele. I am really looking forward to Wednesday when it will, hopefully, be updated. Wednesday is also the day that your pal, Grizzly, updates their OC FT FF, "The Shifter's Journey". :)

Such a cute chapter! Update soon please!

So much cute! Update soon please!

That was real good keep it up

I love stories that are all fluff, keep up the good work, cant wait for more

Aww this was so cute! I love how nervous Natsu got and I could even feel his anticipation. You did such a good job with portraying his emotions. I'm really looking forward to this fluffy cuteness!

Sooooo cute! :3 this fic leaves me so happy after i read it! Update soon please!

AWWWWeeee he's gonna propose!Update soon please!

Aww write more soon Kk

OH MY MAVIS, The first was so hilarious. The whole Private and sergeant business I couldn't get enough of it.

It definitely was a funny and ingenious way to teach Natsu how to clean *snickers*

Anyway down to the next part:

The part with the cats was hilarious. I never would've taken Natsu as a cat hater since Happy is very often mistaken as a cat. I wonder how you came up with Igneel saying he hatched a flock of birds before.

That was funny.

People who work in expensive shops can be really snotty, that's part of the reason I try to avoid them because I'd probably knock one out. Anyway I'm off topic.

In all I really loved this chapter, Stele, and I can't wait to see what else you have planned.

No offence but Lucy is such a girly/easily weepy character but nice story

STELE! THIS WAS TOOOOOO ADORABLE! I HAVE SO MANY CAVITIES FROM HOW CUTE THIS WAS!

Yay! I loved every word! Update soon please!