This is an awesome story: ) fantastic writing: ) so cute too : ) with just the right mix of angst and comfort: )

Aww, that was so sweet! I love this! :D

I love it. Thank you! Now I believe I have a chance with my crush!

XD. Adorkable

Love love love the chapter's that you added! Keep going! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! They are SOO cute together!

I completely disagree with this being badly written! There is good reasoning and logic behind the pairing, with Hunk having totally figured out that Lance says he hates Keith because he has/had a crush on him. The characters are not too out of character for me, at all! It makes me really upset that someone would send you a message like that, so I just wanted to say thanks for writing this fic, I'm enjoying it very much, the spanish is great, and please don't let it get to you too much. Not every fanfic has to be a literary masterpiece. 3

Dear author...

I believe you should block guest reviews... If the person really wanted to contribute towards your skill as a writer and help you grow 9 times out of 10, they would message you privately and or offer constructive criticism. The guests leaving hurtful comments are cyber-Trolls who don't deserve a voice. I personally think that you're doing agood job and a good service for this fandom considering your situation, please continue your writing if it makes you happy and don't let these troll's get to you.

OMG I can't believe someone said those things to you! Thats horrible! I personally think this is a great story with a talented author and a delectable plot line! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Don't believe that narrow-minded dick! You're a wonderful writer don't let anyone tell you otherwise! xoxo

I agree with guest, tyki075, Elizabeth Fray, and Triscribe! Sorry I would rant about how amazing this story is bi Tim not good with expressing my feelings. Just know I think you're a amazing author.

Okay, wait, nonono. This makes me so incredibly angry. Yes, there are a ton of stories out there that are far from being easily readable or good - those I usually throw a glance at and then back off again - but your story is far from that.
Whoever that person is I would like to have a long long talk to her to stick her pickyness up where the sun doesn't shine, seriously. Those stories here a FANFICTIONS, no quality books, no stories to be sold or anything like that. We do it with no payment and every second we invest in writing it should so not be taken for granted, no matter how good or bad it is. Instead of ranting and being as far from professional as can be - which she seems to insist on, so why exclude her from that - she should have given you tips or told you to take your time with uploading or whatever.
Now, your story is far from being as bad as she makes it seem like, there are no major grammatical errors that stop the flow, your story has a lot of romantic and funny elements in it and the characters don't seem to be ooc(except from the relationship part, but that goes without saying).
Don't be motivated by people taking their mood out on you, it's not far at all and not true!

Greetings, MiluGeorgia

I'm really liking the story so far! I can completely understand why your JOB would take precedence over this, of course it would. I don't see anything wrong with the story so far and whomever is complaining can shut the fuck up, they don't seem to understand that fan fiction writers don't HAVE to do this, they spend their own time doing it to please other people and because they enjoy it. You're doing great! Keep up the good work!

I really, really enjoy this story. I got very excited when I saw it updated (granted this is not a new chapter, but still). I usually don't post reviews, but this is important. That one person is irrelevant, so don't listen to them and continue doing what you like to do. I look forward to future chapters (supposing that there will be future chapters) and I hope that your situation gets better. Best of luck to you and your family!

Fuck that guy- I can't even describe using words how good this story is. That guy's an asshole- he's irrelevant

I think it's been written perfectly well, which is even more of an achievement after seeing all the other troubles you're dealing with.
Anyone who complains about this is just a sourpuss who can't deal with the crap in their own lives, and finds another outlet for that anger. Ignore them to the best of your ability, and the rest of us will continue to enjoy any other work you're kind enough to grace to us on this site.
Good luck with your jobs, and I hope your sister's surgery goes well!
-Tri

/snicker
Poor Lance. And poorer Hunk, having to deal with him.
I love that this turned out to be more than just a one-shot... :)