Intriguing

Very interesting first chapter. I like that Sirius thought he was dreaming about what was happening, I love your characterisation of Sirius here, and what he wished for. It may be selfish, but I agree with what he answered, because that's very Sirius!

I love how he's making a deal with Kizzy to help her, and she's going to help him too. I really hpe it's Remus he brings with him :p

Great start to the story! :D