This was a rollercoaster of a fic and it was worth every second! I'll be reading the sequels -

I got a fan theory about Tris' and Four's record low number of fears. I wonder if perhaps because of the fact they grew up in Abnegation is the reason for it. Fear is often cause by life experience that didn't go well or cause response such as Marcus' abuse on Four causing two of Four's fears or when Peter Drew and Al kidnapped Tris causing her fear of being kidnapped.

but normally in Abnegation independents are raised to be selfless putting everything before themselves and because of it they live in life of plain stiff life to avoid any form of selfishness compare to other factions. Because of that they don't adventure out and experience anything that would cause fear and because of it their number of fears are low.

I realized something after reading this series and a book series Blue Plague, Four now reminds me of Mike Collins from the Blue Plague series with heels, only Mike prefer Red heals on his wife.

OK OK OK let me get one thing straight when i was dreading this i thought that it was by v Roth but it's not so,anyways girl you have annoyed the hell outta me why the friking hell do you end it with "there is something wrong with the baby"? hmm? just why the hell do you do that i need more you have broken me forever and I wil never be fixed unless you finsh this fanfic now I dont normally swear but what the hell bitch

YOU my friend are an amazing righter and don't let anyone tell you otherwise when I am reading this I feel like it's done by

I love the way you wright.

Wow! I mean plot twist for the insane! I wasn't expecting something so deep, tbh like a candor

I really like your writing style! You're a great writer and I have lost myself more than once while reading your stories!

Woah plot twist there at the end... Great job, i've been hooked on this for three days straight.

Hahahaha
Watching book thief
While simultaneously
Reading this
# depression

Wow... So... First.
1. Wow good job. Plot twist I never saw coming.
2. Awwww Anndrew!
3. At first I thought this was only a slightly different story line than divergent but... Kts so much beeter.
Heres y: tris aint ded... Yet...
Toby n trissssss
Really good grammar, structure, and plotline.
Keep up the great work!

Is this the book rewritten further in?

Why does it end there!

If I didn't already know there are more installments to this amazing story, I'd be freaking out right now! Incredible story! Thank you

Nathan's friends that Natalie didn't like had the surname Parrish...surely it's not the doc. I did not see that coming. Loving this! It's honestly so incredible! So well thought out and written!