I’m curious if Harry was still a parseltongue? Or did he lose the ability he gained from the Horcrux...or was he somehow related to Slytherin through someone.

Very interesting. I loved Sirius’ reaction to writing to Sumbledore last chapter. That would be my response as a parent also, especially with how Dumbledore just dropped Harry off and didn’t check on him. I like the explanation of how the ward didn’t allow Wizards to find him...and since he really was not Harry’s magical Guardian, he was hit by the same affliction. So only Sirius would have been able to check up on him. And even with Arabella telling him, there would have been nothing he could do.

And because he walks on water and carries his own lake...he wouldn’t want to admit that he did something that affected him also! Lol. Hubris.

Very interesting!

(However...if the country was smart, they would insist that people stay in isolation before they have their medical certifications that they are not bringing in any diseases. Not let them run all over the city interacting with everyone and potentially spreading something, and then get checked. Lol, but then again, that could be explained away as ‘magicals!’

Still enjoying the story though.

Slow at the start and rushed at the end, but overall a great story. Thank you

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Nice. Short and sweet. A good AU story.

Oh, that is a clever plan. I hope Remus will manage to pull it off. I also liked Sirius's questioning after Harry and how he is. Moody's approval of Dumbledore's hiding skills was neat too. Remus's guilt about having nothing to offer Sirius was a bit sad, but I hope maybe he'll find some time while looking for Peter to visit Dumbledore and ask after Harry a little so he can at least assure Sirius Harry is doing well (even though he probably isn't).

"cut of his finger, blew up the street" of should be off.
Where you use Muggle and Death Eater, they should be capitalized. As that's how it is typically done in fanfiction.
Sometimes, you explain things that don't really need explanation. Such as what Azkaban is and the like. Because this is fanfiction, people are going to already know the basics like that. So explaining it to readers is redundant.
As a whole, this was a pleasant first chapter. It did a good job of introducing what the premise of this story is going to be about. I like how Remus is being offered a job at Hogwarts early in this fic. Dumbledore planting the idea Sirius might be innocent in Remus's head was nice. Though, I wish we could have seen what made him start to question Sirius's guilt – since he never did in canon. You give some interesting reasons, like his animagus form being a dog, how it'd be strange that he'd become a Death Eater after being so obviously a black sheep from his family, but these obviously never compelled Dumbledore in canon, so what happened here?

My interpretation of the Dursleys’ abuse of Harry is that they used starvation and imprisonment as formal punishment because they had learned when he was very young that anticipated violence would always trigger his accidental magic in self-defence. They switched to less direct forms of discipline that would not rebound violently on themselves, but this wouldn't completely stop them from physically lashing out in anger. Harry's comment that a person would need “a good sense of when to duck” in order to deal with his uncle tells me that Vernon, certainly, was prone to suddenly striking Harry without warning.

There is such a thing as reverse bashing, I think. Fudge not being an idiot is inherently out of character.

Love the story and how you went about writing. I'm glad Harry, Siri, and Remy are out of British control. While you jumped from Harry getting accepted to his death and mentioning how Dumbles handled Horcruxes, I am glad you ended it without too many holes. Good job write on!

Nice story, I really enjoyed reading it.

hola! me encanto muy buena la historia espero que lo actualicen pronto besos

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Uagadou! Yes!

I absolutely love this story and hope that instead of just fourteen or fifteen chapters, you consider keeping it going or writing a sequel. I have never read another like it on FF and cannot say enough good things about it.