| Reviews for A Grain of Sand Among the Leaves |
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   Pink ranger 13 chapter 5 . 12/4/2018 It’s a great story and please continue the story! |
| hachinonana chapter 5 . 9/19/2016 Honestly, I want to see Naruto interact with this Kushina/Minato after Gaara grows up a bit just for angst. Like maybe Naruto doesn't even let them know that he's supposed to be their son. |
| Damaged Ghost of an Angel chapter 5 . 9/19/2016 Seriously interesting story here. I can't wait to see where it goes. |
| GwendolynStacy chapter 5 . 9/8/2016 Aww... I'm in love! Kakashi with Gaara is just so adorable! I love them both so much, I can't wait when Gaara will actually be able to interact with him a bit more! Like, he's super cute as baby, but it will be even more fun when he's a bit older! He's gonna be so happy, he couldn't have had better parents! |
| sakuzi-chan chapter 5 . 9/6/2016 Mmm quite a bit of angst but you are settling the chars well. Kakashi with baby Gaara is really too cute. More? :) |
| Toshiro with love chapter 4 . 8/31/2016 I read all 4 chapters in a row, it looks like a good story. I am a bit sad that since Kushina can't have children this insinuates there is no Naruto... but a Sasuke/Gaara story sounds fun too. Read ya soon! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2016 Incredible! |
| GwendolynStacy chapter 4 . 8/28/2016 Well, tbh I didn't expect you to update this early - and more than one chapter, too! :D Now there's even Itachi, you just keep adding more and more of my favorite characters! Also, baby Sasuke - aww! Kakashi is adorable btw, he doesn't have a clue! Keep up the good work, I'm loving it! ~Gwen |
| GwendolynStacy chapter 1 . 8/27/2016 I love it so far! The story has definitely potential, and I can't wait to see the dynamic you'll create for the characters! Your writing is nice and smooth, and I think so far you've got the characterization of the characters just right. It already sounds like you plan on having Kakashi like a big brother, which (if I'm right), I'd love! But in that case I'm curious how you're gonna develop his character in this 'verse, I don't feel like the canon Kakashi at this age would be quite the family type. But since Minato and Kushina'll stay alive, I can't wait to see how it influences him! Are you planning on only showing snapshots out of their life, or is this gonna be a longer story? I'm rooting for the latter, tbh :P See you then! ~Gwen PS, something minor, but I think you called Kushina Kashina a few times, and you might want to look at the last sentence again :) Have a nice day! xx |
