| Reviews for Undying Human |
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MrWalkerMan chapter 2 . 6/15 I already disliked Issei, now you're making me hate him... |
Ariadne Venegas chapter 5 . 5/15 So he helped with the chaos brigade and all that so they didn’t hurt his Asia? Also is “Bushou” for Rias I love it! |
Bryan Of Grimm chapter 5 . 3/23 I enjoyed this. Even if your grammar is bad, the story good |
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 5 . 1/5 This was a good idea and the story was neat but the grammar really kills this. |
UsagiKing chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 I coughed blood when I read this chap LMFAO. The correct word is Opinion. Not options. |
NazgulBelserion chapter 5 . 11/26/2019 Respect atleast you had the balls to finish it unlike 90% of everyone else |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 5 . 11/21/2019 Pretty nice concept! The writing itself, mostly the spelling and grammar could use a little work. But I like the idea a lot. |
Xud10a chapter 5 . 11/17/2019 That’s a sweet ending to this story. It’s a shame it was rushed but I liked it nevertheless |
Tsukoblue chapter 5 . 11/16/2019 I am glad to see this story get updated but this epilogue seemed rushed skipping everything involving Ophis and the Chaos Brigade and everything after |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2019 Honestly could have been a tiny little better with grammar correction. Would have loved if the story was longer but your story your rules and so. It was cute, I can see you wanted to make the story longer but maybe got bored or annoyed and just decide to rush it really fast. It was cute honestly. So yeah. |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2019 Wow ended that quick but thanks for the lemon |
M2R chapter 2 . 11/12/2019 i don't really agree with asia becoming a devil though. but meh, that's my opinion not everyone else |
Mrhexx chapter 5 . 11/11/2019 Ok so the grammar on this chapter was absolutely terrible. You clearly need to re read your chapters before uploading them. |
Feelings-of-Solitude chapter 5 . 11/11/2019 It was a little rushed, but all in all, it was really good. |
hellfire45 chapter 5 . 11/11/2019 Good chapter and really good story I kind of wish it could continue but still great |