Reviews for Undying Human
MrWalkerMan chapter 2 . 6/15
I already disliked Issei, now you're making me hate him...
Ariadne Venegas chapter 5 . 5/15
So he helped with the chaos brigade and all that so they didn’t hurt his Asia?

Also is “Bushou” for Rias

I love it!
Bryan Of Grimm chapter 5 . 3/23
I enjoyed this. Even if your grammar is bad, the story good
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 5 . 1/5
This was a good idea and the story was neat but the grammar really kills this.
UsagiKing chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
I coughed blood when I read this chap LMFAO. The correct word is Opinion. Not options.
NazgulBelserion chapter 5 . 11/26/2019
Respect atleast you had the balls to finish it unlike 90% of everyone else
ElementalMaster16 chapter 5 . 11/21/2019
Pretty nice concept! The writing itself, mostly the spelling and grammar could use a little work. But I like the idea a lot.
Xud10a chapter 5 . 11/17/2019
That’s a sweet ending to this story. It’s a shame it was rushed but I liked it nevertheless
Tsukoblue chapter 5 . 11/16/2019
I am glad to see this story get updated but this epilogue seemed rushed skipping everything involving Ophis and the Chaos Brigade and everything after
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2019
Honestly could have been a tiny little better with grammar correction. Would have loved if the story was longer but your story your rules and so. It was cute, I can see you wanted to make the story longer but maybe got bored or annoyed and just decide to rush it really fast. It was cute honestly. So yeah.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2019
Wow ended that quick but thanks for the lemon
M2R chapter 2 . 11/12/2019
i don't really agree with asia becoming a devil though. but meh, that's my opinion not everyone else
Mrhexx chapter 5 . 11/11/2019
Ok so the grammar on this chapter was absolutely terrible. You clearly need to re read your chapters before uploading them.
Feelings-of-Solitude chapter 5 . 11/11/2019
It was a little rushed, but all in all, it was really good.
hellfire45 chapter 5 . 11/11/2019
Good chapter and really good story I kind of wish it could continue but still great
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