Daang. This is absolutely fantastic! You did so well with the idea and I'd like to congratulate you on that. Stunning indeed.

Keep writing!

This is very well done! The details you imagine are quite feasible. There are a few places were grammar or wording could be improved but nothing that stands out too much. Overall good job on this. :)

Wow I love this backstory. Nicely written too! Is there going to be another chapter?

I like your introspective piece. I particularly like the uncertainty the characters are feeling.

This is very good! Oh, Shiro! T-T He's so kind and selfless, trying to save Matt and all! Is thee more to the story? I don't see the "COMPLETE" status on...