aw their warming up to each other cute

jifdhiojjfdijidsIFUCKINGLOVETHISOMFGHJKLOKIJNE
Kay so... yeah so... and all of a sudden, I got hyped, I swear!
Composure? Composure? Where art thou? IDK it was so darn raw!
I loved it it, it was so... intense os indescribable you know, its like ONE OF THOSE FREAKING ROLLERCOASTER RIDE THAT GETS YOUR HEART GOING AND YOU NEVER WANT IT TO STOP BUT ITS SO DARN INTENSE THAT YOU CANT TAKE IT BUT YOU WANT IT! YOU NEED IT GOOODDDDD I FREAKING LOVE DESTRUCTIVE REDS. Love, hate; two disparate elements that can become enterwined because their love isnt love and their hate isnt hate. Its just the 'i need you here now but i cant stand your face!' its like if Tov Lo and Bebe Rexha had a song and our inner elemental emotions comin into play and...
I need to stop
I loved this
Keep writing,
T-Mari

Quite good work.

Ohhhh! An update of one of my favorite Reds stories? Yessss!

Brick and Blossom are slowly starting to bond and it makes the Reds fanfirl in me so happy- this date ( because Blossom dear it was a date who you fooling XD) - but how lovely was it to see Brick feeling so at ease with his counterpart- frenemy - the scene with the frightened barista made me sad a wee bit/ poor boy can't even walk around town it seems like T_T

But then he followed her into a lovely garden and it wa was Reds goodness for all-the detail of Brick secretly liking flowers but just could NEVER dare say it loud made me giggle- as did the scene by the cherry blossoms-

" I am with my people." - XD - that was great.

I do wonder what all their siblings' reactions will be however - was Buttercup REALLY appeased by Blossom's lame cover up for that slip of the tongue- remains to be determined for now. I am quite intrigued to see what comes next in this tale.

Fabulous job again! :D

Cheers,
Carrie

Damn Brick is convincing

Quite nice this one was.

The philosophical bleougener lol

Consider my interest officially peeked.

This was beautiful. I'd like to see the turn of events.
Please continue!

I liked it! Good job with the dialogue. It sure is smthg I can see Blossom debating within herself later in life

Ah this was so well written, good job! You should be proud of yourself!

I love when people write about the inner struggles of the Girls and Boys, as I really do feel like the girls are underappreciated by Townsville, and you did a bang up job of expressing that!

Well done! I hope to see more from you soon!

Mrs. RoseGold xoxoxox

Now this was intriguing- a rather deep look into the bitter realities of being superhuman it seems- that detail about the woman yelling about damage to her car now that was telling- will Blossom start seeing things differently I wonder- her rose colored glasses per se are they starting to crack? Hmm

Or will it be more that Brick starts to see things differently too- or will it be a mix of both - their conversation obviously affected him too - again I am most intrigued.

I will definitely be on the lookout for this one and this was an awesome start to what will definitely be a great one! Fabulpus job! :D

Best of luck on all your writing adventures!

Cheers,
Carrie

more i need more

This is so far a good start.