Awesome! I love Ninetails and Naruto! :D Hope it will update soon

keep up the good work

Sounds really interesting so far

I like the idea, but please get a beta. Or use spellcheck. You have an ton of spaces that shouldn't be there, you're missing a lot of commas, and you need to remember that Pokemon and names need to be capitalized. Among other mistakes.

For example: When using dialogue, you don't have a space in between the quotation mark and the sentence. Ninetails is always capitalized. You need a comma right after you have he/she/it said/replied/whatever. Like this: "Fine," he said, "let's get some rest." Not: "Fine" he sighed " let's get some rest. "

If you can clean that up, I think you'll have a good story.

Will Lance make a appearance.

i like your story keep it up.

looks good cant wait for the next chapter

This is a very good start to this story. I like how you brought naruto in as an outsider. I'm interested in seeing what comes next.

So he's the outsider to the konoha crew interesting.