I can't help but appreciate how there are similarities between Sam and Kathy. Danny has a type. XD Also a fantastic story. Marilyn and Vlad have awesome chemistry together. I like how Marilynn has her own baggage too. Granted not as big as Vlad’s but very grounding for her character.

aaaaaaa I used to read Pompous pep, but your fanfic is really good and I enjoy it. Please please update :D

-cackles- Teenage wingman... Buahahahahahahahahahaha! Oh boy, that was funny. I can't wait to see what'll happen next! :D

Aaaaaaaah you mentioned all my favorite musicals! Great choice using Monte Cristo, by the way. Keep up the good work!

This was written so beautifully and clearly

I'm so happy that the story got another chapter! It's quickly shaping up to be one of my favs. Thank you Diiva!

Ha ha, blushing Vlad. It's something that came naturally, the chemistry between the two is very nice to watch.

I cant see your nifty pictures for this chapter :( Thats okay though I am satisfied enough with just the writing :)

This is really good:3 I cant wait to read your next chapter!

A great story that has me hooked. Keep it up!

Okay vlad has some serious character flaws, like greed, using his powers for gaining wealth, etc im intrested how a rich man like him could have a heart. I love this story though and i cant wait to see how one of his character flaws would offend his date and how she would react. Im glad he hasnt lied to her, well just one lie, the one where she looks like maddie. Hope she never figures that out lol. I wonder how Danny will react lol! Will Vlad hate danny less? Go easier on him? Will he still obses over maddie? Will vlad give kathy a chance (id like to see dannys pick)? I want to see more of danny. Inthe cartoon vlad generally is way more powerful than himand tends to leave danny severly beat up. Vlad even attempted to murder his father and steal maddie but maddie cannot be bought. These are serious character flaws like stealing and being a extremly wealthy cold person, but im glad that under all that vlad has a heart and is capable of love (i hope). Another indirect lie of vlad is that he did not tell his date that he is filthy rich lolol! I can imagine her being furious when she finds out if he postpones not telling her for so long. And the fact that he is part evil (emphasis on the evil) ghost. (See "the ultimate enemy" reference to vlads ghost half being evil). I want more of danny in this story cus i like him so much, anyway i wonder if danny will be so upset with the looks of the vlads date that he will try to interfere and go on the laptop and sabotage (that might get danny killed tbh), I also want to see a scene where Vlad and danny havea fight, but vlad once wanted to be accepted by danny in the "maternal instincts " so i wonder if vlad and danny become closer. Dannys mom even says once that he doesnt care about people, so maybe that character flaw will be revealed to the date. Great story, will read the next one :)

I hope Danny's call wasn't important.

So cute. .more :)
Btw If Danny saw her or a photo of her I think he would jump to conclusión and belive that Vlad had totaly lost it and had invented himself a copy of maddy with other name. Vlad would be amused and maybe would tease Danny a little bit XD

A nicely done chapter of the first date of Marilynn and Vladimir Masters! I love how understanding and observant Marilynn is, and how playful and connecting the dialogue is between the two! AND I LOVE THE CHEEK KISS AND VLAD BEING FLUSTERED BY THAT

Awww it's so sweet and cute!