Reviews for just the way you are |
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NoMeImporta32 chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 That was adorable. |
Gabby chapter 1 . 12/15/2018 I loved it I thought it was cute and funny and great at the same time |
DragonGamer chapter 1 . 10/25/2018 It was sooooo AMAZING, i ship these two and will always love them! #KamiJirou |
I12Bfree chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 This is so sweet!XD Please write more Kamijirou! |
Angel of Pandemonium chapter 1 . 5/14/2018 dawww... so cute. |
King287 chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 They better become canon. I really loved reading this story you're a great writer! Keep it up! |
CrackPairingLover chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 This was adorable! I loved it a lot! XD Anyway, keep it up! |
wercrazybesties4lyf chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Ooofff! Ma hart! I love this ! |
morbidGenocide chapter 1 . 6/26/2017 This is actually really cute and I kind of love it |
Yuri Hannah chapter 1 . 5/22/2017 SO CUTEEEEE |
Nucleophile chapter 1 . 10/29/2016 Had to post as a guest this time around, but- BWAHAHAHA! Think you'd gotten rid of me? YOU REVISED IT, DUDE! AND IT'S, LIKE, 2X BETTER! THE SUBTLETY. THE FEELS! THE WORD CHOICES! WELL-DONE BWAHAHAHAHA! TAKE MY WALLET! MY CAR! MY FIRST-BORN! I DON'T CARE ANYMORE! *runs off naked, cackling manaically as crack trails from the nose* |
Fier66 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 Best boy and best girl. 10/10 fic. Still, I wonder what fans will think when the Kaminari traitor theory turned out to be real. |
Nucleophile chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 Well ain't this an intriguing piece of work. The lack of love Jirou gets from the fandom is absolutely egregious, and your work is a fine step towards breaching the gap. I like the concept, with the climax being offensively cute. That said, there were a couple things language-wise you could have done to make story better. Firstly, I think your prose could have flowed more smoothly if it were framed in the past tense. Secondly, don't be afraid to show a bit more at the expense of telling. For example, you wouldn't have to blatantly describe Denki as nervous if you were a bit more tasteful with the dialogue and body language (both of which, by the way, were already done well when you wrote how Denki initiated the conversation). Either way, this is still a solid fic and I hope you continue to produce more content! |
iarrelm chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 Aww, this is really cute! I like it a lot. Kaminari is really sweet, I like how you write him. He flirts a lot but is a huge dork. I need more stories like this about Jirou. I feel like her being insecure about things should be addressed more. It's pretty important. I like how you wrote her too. I really liked this! I haven't seen a whole lot of this paring, so I'm glad that you wrote this! Awesome story! |