Like one of your other stories the grammar has hardly any mistakes, and a very interesting story line. Please try to write more of the story.

Your story is not needing as much grammar problems as the story itself is left incomplete. You had me hooked within the first few sentences that I couldn’t stop reading. You just need to continue the story. I really want to know what Yami’s naga form will look like.

I love it can you please do another chapter

Oh my god, I thought this fic was abandoned but I'm glad if your going to continue it!
I really love Naga AU! It sad though that only a few that I found.
When I first read your story the first time I was so excited and happy!
I keep wanting and waiting for the next chapter but it didn't appear for quite sometime..
I was sad to think that you won't continue the story but if you do continue it, I be the first person that will read it till the end of the story!

Please finish some of your unfinished work. You're stories are very interesting.

Please finish the rest of all your stories.

I love your story can you please write another chapter.

I love your story a I ask no beg of you to write another chapter

I really love this story could you write some more chapters . Because you cant leave it with one full chapter and a note page , So i would like to know what will happen to yami .
Ps you are a good writer

I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please write another chapter soon please please please please!

Please continue

I really like how this one is going so far. When are you posting the next chapter?

Good story. I hope there will be more chapters. :)

Please do more chapters of this story and finish it of

Thank you for the tension-filled premise. Hope you have a nice day and a happy New Year.