Thanks for this chapter. Don’t worry about going towards something else. Everyone that reads incomplete stories on this site knows that it may possibly never be finished. I, for one, enjoy the process far more than the product in my hobbies. You are not getting paid for it so when it stops being fun and relaxing, time to pass to something else.

Enjoy your next enterprise

Your story, your decision, it should make you happy or it is not worth it. Life is stressful enough without adding any unnecessary misery to it. It would be nice if you posted your notes on what you intended, it would give us closure.

Enjoy your next endeavour.

I really enjoy the dynamic between your 2 OC's and their back stories but I feel like they're a little too chummy with Draco too quickly. Also the wizarding world is at war... I would think that would make Draco stressed and aggressive, someone who doesn't trust them one bit, who wouldn't trust anyone given who his family is and who he's been living with. War isn't sunshine and roses. It takes its toll on people. ...however, this is your story so I'm trying to suspend my disbelief but it's hard.

Aww this is so sweet! Finally you guys told each other your feelings. I love all your OC characters and can't wait for the next chapter. Please for the love of Odin update soon! I'll be waiting!

What a way to end the chapter! Your writing is enjoyable as always, but this chapter was a bit different than the previous chapters. Normally you have just one scene taking place at a time at a slow pace, but in this chapter you have so many things going on, a line break, or something that signifies a change when you switch off of Brynhar and Astra. Because one paragraph is about Brynjar and his mates then it switches to Astra in the next one, the vice versa. Something that prepares the reader mentally on the change of scenery is very appreciated, which is why line breaks are an awesome thing. Now, don't get me wrong, you still wrote an awesome chapter, I enjoyed the whole banter between Astra and Brynjar and their mates, but it's wise to add something like ~With Astra~ or With Brynjar or something along those lines to help the reader understand the transition between one character to the other. All the other chapters didn't require a line break, but they didn't have this much people involved either. Also, there are a few grammatical errors near the beginning of the story as well, you seemed to forget a letter or two, nothing huge. Except those two things, an awesome chapter and I hope to find what happens next, especially after that last paragraph!

Sorry for the late review, I was busy, but nevertheless an awesome read! A slow progression of the war is nice to read, especially will such humourous characters. I've actually laughed out loud a few times in this chapter, able to be both serious and funny at the same time, now that's a talent. Looking forward to the next update for sure :D

Interesting as the others I must say. I've only noticed that these chapters all seek to happen in a single day, like this chapter for example, all of these events took place in a single day, as well as the chapter before them. I'm actually quite impressed to be honest, not many people put that much detail into their stories, and I'm sorry for only realising it until now, I was too focused on the fabulous plot. But color me impressed, you not only manage to write an explicit story, but you also manage to keep it balanced, and progressing the plot at a steady pace. I don't think you realise how hard that is to do, if you have too many details, its going to bore the reader, but if you have too little details, it's not going to intrigue the reader. You managed to have it at the border of too many details, but also keeping the reader interested. That's a pretty good talent, very few authors are able to do that, and I applaud your writing style. Well as always I've enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the next update!

Oh shit, I forgot to mention the plot twist. Now I have to see what happens next.

Oh my oh my. I'm glad I've stumbled onto this story for this is a really entertaining read. It's a nice change from the usual Harry Potter fanfics, such a wonderful back story and a rather large potential to be a lemon. But idk of you write that stuff or not, but having such tension between Astra and Brynjar just makes me have to ask. also, you really do have a great story, unfortunately I'm the only one who is telling you how great your story is, and it must suck to work so hard and have only one person respond. I can understand that's frustrating. But that's there loss for missing out. :D P.S. where did you get the names Astra and Brynjar?

Oh my god. Well if the chapters are going to be like this, I'm definitely going to follow this. The first chapter was really interesting, the plot was new and intriguing and this chapter definitely is just a well done. this is a really good story you have here, I look forward to see how this turns out.

Not a bad start. I'll give it a shot.