Very good story, I loved it, too bad I can't find anywhere the part II

I love this.

Wow, this was an absolutely adorable story! I completely loved it! Good job with it!

How sweet. You did good! :-D More more more SM fanfics, please! :-D

I love this story! Sure, it may be based on a series which I'm not very fond of, but it has all the elements of a great story. It's very well written, planned, and entertaining. I'd be more than happy to offer you criticism, but doing so would require an extensive search for small nitpicky spelling mistakes, continuity errors, etc; but since none actually seem to break the stories coherancy, that'd be a waste of time for someone simply enjoying the story.

Characters act very believably (aside from the obvious exception of their magical abilities and enviroment). They even start acting like children! There's not many who can pull off believably portraying children as the main characters; I think you and your co-authors did a great job here! Character 'in-characterness' and development were also well done.

Storywise, the fanfic is very engrossing - even bringing me to tears at the end. Not many fanfics (or even original works) can do that to me! I'll definately look forward to any future works that you author or co-author!

I liked this story a lot. Maybe i can help do a sequel for the outer scouts

I loved this story. I was laughing out loud at some parts. I don't think it should be ansgt though. You have done an excellent job. I think you should do a sequel.

GREAT start Keep it up.