update please

i love the way you write. i mean considering the fact that you're a literature student, their dialogues just blows me since I'm a bit of a dork when it comes that that kind of sentence construction.

So good! So deep! I love it! (Want more if you will!)

next chapter please

marvelous please be consistent with your posts thanks

Are you sure this a fanfiction only? because I read some literature works that their writers would feel ashamed when compared with you.
even though you said that you meant for it to be a romantic comedy, but I didn't sense any clumsiness in transitions from comedy to drama.
the characters are detailed simply yet so sophisticated.
the scenes leave just enough for the imagination to work.
are you perhaps a real writer?
Just hurry and put the second chapter.

Oh my god! Such a beautiful story! One worthy of being printed in books. If I did not know that this is a fanfiction I would have thought of it as a real book. You, sir, are a person who is given a gift with words.

Omg this is so good like seriously I can just imagine this scene in the anime with the English dub

i find erina to be a little ooc in the beginning...

UPDATE!
So... they're not fake lover again right?

Really liking your story. I like the way you write and all the quotes and all it's nice. Can't wait for your next chapter!

That was amazing as a first chapter.. Can't give a decent review simply because my brain overloaded with SoRina moments.. LoL

Hope to see another chapter soon..

Nice, please continue writing

My what a list of famous authors. I was wondering why it did a sudden jump from romantic comedy to a more serious drama romance, its simply you did not where you were going with the story. You are correct you are not very good at writting romcom, stick with the drama romance and it will be really good. I am looking forward to the next chapter