Like the abuser killer dead

I hope harry totally saved severus

I think harry should take hedwig if alive

Haha, this was hilarious. I loved it!

nice

I'm down with the less than stellar view of Lily. I think she was in the wrong for how she treated Severus.

This was hilarious! Thank you!
Wormtail's fate was a bit extreme but I still laughed because it was too funny not to XD

Epic

Plz update sn tom nd harry parring maybe regulas or rasbutan for snape

Thank you! It was light to read; snark was present; a bit unhinged characters... and it was funny as you claimed. Harry/Tom paring to boot! 3 Hugs for writing this story.

It jumped around alot and had an manic flow but it was entertaining nonetheless. Its a good concept overall. Could use a bit of work but overall good job! Write on!

Ok, this was an interesting fic. In fact it lost me quite a few times...but it shows that you have massive potential...I would suggest a BETA, but this is fairly well written. Like I said it lost me a few times and I think the ending was a little weak. I mean I'm not against slash relationships but spontaneous Harry/Voldemort is a bit weird for me. Anyway well done on this, keep writing and having fun with it.
Happy Writing!

Thanks so much for this! I was laughing like a maniac in the middle of a restaurantgood times! I didn't think it was that explicit, personally. I felt like there was enough description to get the mood and point across (loved the tension), but not make it awkard.

I love this what if story and I had a good chuckle reading it too !

The Crimson Mage.
P.S: Hope to see more of your work in the future !

hahahah omg this is just hahaha it made me laugh so hard the endng was priceless just great