You know, that's the thing that never left my mind when seeing that scene. I really never knew what Twilight was gonna say to Sunset when she called her, but said never mind. This fic shows exactly how I wanted it to go.

There were no errors. Nicely done, and apparently tonight I cannot spell... That was, interesting.

you did a good job, dude. the only error is that the story repeats at the end. nothing else. keep up the good work!