I... really love this. (I'M AWARE I'M LIKE 14 YEARS TOO LATE TO MEAN ANYTHING NOW BUT IT'S OKAY THIS IS STILL SUPERB AND DESERVES A REVIEW.) Your use of sensory details is so lovely, and you really nailed the characterization. Thank you for sharing this!

Late review, but for some reason I just found this. Cutest. Thing. Ever.

It's been over seven months since you wrote this, why haven't you added anything? It's a great first chapter! Don't stop! Write more!

heehee, that was great! absolutely wonderful!

Please Continue. You writing really shows how uncomfortable Elizabeh was. I liked how you showe it with small details. Please update soon.

I like this...Please continue

I love it, please write some more. Drunken Rocket intrigues me!

Well, I'm intrigued so far! I like some of the little details you've put in there, like Lizzie noticing the leather of his shoes. You do a nice job of showing her awkwardness around him, and also having her decide to humor him (and listen to him). Please continue soon!

Good start! Can't wait to hear more! Good handling of Rocket dialogue!

oooo! Please write more!