| Reviews for as the wild current sings, clarity over skies |
|---|
   Redbone-6Skin6 chapter 4 . 6/28 This is the first time I've ever legitimately hated something, someone. My eyes were just wide as I read this, and the one thing I wanted to do above all else was get rid of the fucking heart paplitations I felt increase more and more as my desire to swing a hammer through dimensional barriers and smash Kiyo's head in and truly kill her via Ego Death and destroying her consciousness just got more and more intense. I could feel my fucking heart squeeze, my chest tighten, and I wanted to end her. Dropped. If your intension was to create a character that was cowardly, disgustingly pitiful, then you succeeded. I can't think of a distinct constructive criticism I have for her character that explains my first ever experience with hatred other than a broad stroke with the word, "Self-Pitying Bystander". |
| ms.meep chapter 9 . 12/9/2019 i know the last update to this fic was in 2017, and i just read this in end of 2019, and i dont know whether ur muse is all dried up or u dont have interest to continue this fic, but i sincerely hope that u dont bcs this is a gem, and if i were to read this before i sleep, it would surely be in my dreams for sure. Thats how intrigued i am by this fic. Anyways, i still gonna follow and favourite this, eventhough there might be a chance that it wont be updated again, just because its so good and i would reread it again just for the heck of it. |
| Gaming and Readnig 4ever chapter 2 . 12/2/2019 Q1: Kyuubi as a woman that gets together with the OC (they become a couple). Cuz Kurama-chama is, was sentient energy. now though? no clue Q2: any Dragon youkai. P.S does daylight vampires count? |
| Johnny-on-the-spot chapter 9 . 11/23/2019 I enjoyed this story very much. It has a very original and unique concept, I have not read anything similar in fandom. Thank you for your work. |
| Blue Fire Lily chapter 9 . 10/20/2019 Loving this story - will there be any future updates? :) |
| RyuugiAzuma chapter 9 . 8/14/2019 I love this story! It's such an interesting take on a Naruto fanfic I've never seen before! |
| Tobalerone chapter 9 . 7/26/2019 Very interesting story! Look forward to more |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/25/2019 Fantastic job! I love this fanfic and am interested in how you plan on portraying Tsunami's character. Keep up the good work! |
| Ashlynn LionHart chapter 9 . 5/9/2019 This is fantastic. I love how Zabuza keeps calling her baby kami-sama. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/2/2019 can I jaust tll you that I am defimetly hungry for more? |
| Brumalis chapter 9 . 1/30/2019 OMG, I love this story, kiyo is adorable and sad all together, please update! This is one of the best Naruto fics I have ever read. |
| BOSS02109 chapter 9 . 1/26/2019 this is honestly so good I would die for more |
| BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 9 . 1/24/2019 This store is glorious and I’ll treasure it forever |
| BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 4 . 1/24/2019 This is so pretty I wish to cry, I can’t even begin to explain why |
| BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 1 . 1/24/2019 Oh wow this is so beautifully unique. Like I’m in love with this story already, and I have only read chapter 1 |
