Wow... read this story in one shot.. it was action packed n thrilling n I couldn’t wait to read what happens next.. this story is great.. I love it sooooo much.. thankfully the swan-mills family got what they deserves.. they have a chance of living a life they chose n people they love.. thank u for this beautiful story..

Now this is the story that could of been on TV.
Like your style of creative writing, I felt like I was there in 3D.
Love my 3 ladies
Thank you for the mind adventures.

Yas

Krásné příběhy píšete, děkuji za sdílení, za Váš vzácný čas, který nám čtenářům věnujete, nesmírně si toho vážím. Přeji mnoho štěstí a úspěchů nejen pracovních, ale i soukromých. Jsem s pozdravem z Prahy z České republiky Lada Anjela

Because home is where the heart is !

I really like how you develop the alternative stories for the characters as in this case, specially for Regina but it was hard to me picture her as a nymphomanic succubus! I get it was part of the essence of your story but I wish you had given us more than a glimpse of the three years where she and Emma built their romantic relationship. It was a shock to me also learn about Emma's drinking habit and it was hard to imagine her being a jerk to Regina who although being a demon was all patience and caring and it was also difficult picturing Henry while all that happened since she said when the the Charmings appeared that she did not want her kids seeing her drinking more than usual not even in the supposed drunk state she had been almost permanently that first missing year.
I understand this time the relationship between Emma and Regina was not exactly the main topic as the story behind Lucia but I really would love to have more details about that three years.
Anyway, I have always loathed the blue fairy, it's the creepiest and darkest character even in the original story. I'm glad you take off her goody mask for everyone who hasn't seen her true nature.
I also celebrate the clear and strong message about what makes a family. It's not just about blood but caring and being there with unconditional love no matter what. It's acceptance and understanding. I truly enjoyed Neal's role on that.
I've never quite like the Charmings but here I really wanted to punch them!
I know this wasn't about Mr Gold and Belle but I wish we could see Belle's thoughts about Rumple at the end.
What else can I say except I would love to have more chapters specially after the first ten

Less than halfway the current chapters and hooked. Page turner. Hope you keep updating and not leave it as a cliffhanger. Good story!

I don’t know why I hadn’t read this, but it was wonderful!

Excellent, read thru in a day..could not start once stopped. Would have preferred to not have had the 3 year time jump and see relationship develope, but worked out in the end.

Is it bad that I kinda really wanted to see Regina glass SB, and vaporize Blue. ',...,'

Looking forward to updates on newest story. Go SwanQueen!

Man I love it!*-*

This was wonderful, I love that they never went back and the three I wanted to get out were able to leave and start new lives. I loved the family they built that included Neal, the tats, moving across the country, and their TLK! Thank you!

I love this story! I'm really enjoying it and your take on different magic. Is it bad that I just want E&R to take Ruby, Granny & Tink back to the burbs and let the rest of them die? Don't fix the well - get the people they love out and make SB go bye bye. Ugh.

This was a good fic, one that I thoroughly enjoyed and couldn't quite put down. My only complaint was that the Emma and Regina relationship was completely glossed over and I had to learn about it from a summary. Not even a flashback! And also maybe the fact that more than half the people in Storybrooke were not killed when they deserved it.
But that's because I hold grudges with a vengeance and I hated that Emma and Regina HAD to ignore the townsfolk while they hurled insults. God, they had magic! They could've just hurled them all to the ground to stuck them all together and rolled them to a ball and then make them sticky while rolling them throughout town and letting them stick to all the trash and dirt. Yes, I get creative with my tortures.

Emma forgave Snow and Charming way too often. They deserved to die for their ignorance, their dictatorship, and just blatant disregard for anyone but themselves. Gold deserved to die as well, with the Blue Fairy following right after. God this fic made me murderous lol
It astounds me how Belle, characterized as intelligent and adventurous, could be so utterly stupid and love Rumple despite the constant lying straight to her face.

I'm glad that Neal became a good big brother for Regina, and Henry is still kind of ignorant when it comes to good and evil but at least he knows that he doesn't want his family hurt. I don't like that Emma is an alcoholic and the idea of Regina sleeping around kind of made me a little sad. I figured she was sleeping with her dates when she needed to "wash her date off" when she came home but I guess it was because the whole Emma and Regina coming together was completely skipped that I feel a little iffy about it all.

Anyway, I like the idea that they got out of Storybrooke and lived happily ever after (in a sense). Not enough fics do that even though Emma, Henry and Regina are like the only people that can actually leave, canonwise, and you finding another person that can leave (Neal) was pretty ingenious on your part. Props for that haha.

absolutely loved it. thank you!

Awesome story many you could do one with Emma have more dark the light in her