Please continue this. Zora is a giant mood and seeing her reactions to Laxus being pervy is hilarious. I get the feeling that her and Bickslow are gonna be the BROTP. I would to keep reading this , so keep up with the good work!

The characters emotions actually feel somewhat realistic and I really like that she's so stubborn and held her own when she's in pain. She wasn't too pathetic like some OC's who need saving constantly and wasn't too overpowered either. I only just read it all so I don't know if you'd planned to continue the story but please do . Also I really like the LaxusxOC pairing.

Excellent chapter. And I love your cliffhanger! Hope to see more soon.

Was wondering when Laxus was coming back.

I read the first paragraph an tought "this person writes like its an essay" i give you a good tips.
1. Everyone knows the young man is Laxus so you can use yis name from the start. Also descriping things as much as you can for giving an image to the reader how you see something the scenery? Clothes etc.

yourself in their boots if you were in the desert. How would you fee l? Thirsty, hot? Or perhaps enjoying the scenery.

micght not make semce but for a reader. Your story is a canvas you have painted a picture on. Think what you want reader to see in their imagination or feel if they feel same as the characters.

Sorry my yapping hope these help.