7. harem

did? did you just turn dc into The Resident/House?

I dont see the point of reading this...its not like you are going to complete it.
Just like the rest of your stories

Ok, now I'm officially lost. The plot in your story constantly jumps around, with no purpose whatsoever, making it a good series of one shots, but completely sacrificing its consistency. Moreover, it has very confusing and contradictory statements. For example, at the very start, it was said that he worked as a doctor in some hospital, only to jump half a chapter later to his private practice. Later, and I'm going to ignore how much cliché his dialogue with Diana about his origins was, you wrote that Brainiac destroyed Naruto's planet. Forgive my language, but wtf?! Just a chapter ago, in the same dialogue with Diana, you wrote that his world/universe, or however else you want to call it, was torn apart by its own inhabitants!

On a side note though, grammar in this story seem to be exceptional, which makes its borderline unreadable plot an even bigger disappointment. I wish you good luck writing more in the future, and ask you to at least try to compose some form of general plot beforehand.

Sincerely, ImaginaryStranger :)

Please update

The only logical option right now is to go with harem, and I don't really like harem. But to make it good you have to make the harem 3 anymore than that it would become cliche and people will lose interest on the story. The harem should be NarutoxDianaxCirce if you are not sure about adding Grail but if you wanna add her then NarutoxDianaxCircexGrail. The reason with Diana is simple, she already has feeling for Naruto and he can return those feelings, For Circe is again simple they have been together and they should be together again, and for Grail... Do I even have to speak?
I also have one problem with the story... Considering that Naruto is the last of his planet AND has a being that's so fucking old, he was very easily manipulated by the Spectre, you could've made it a bit longer for that conversation. But hey you do you, I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you continue

Peace Oot.

What the fuck. Only has 30 minutes and rushes him to the hospital and is suddenly mr no fucks given and acting like it doesnt matter if he dies while standing next to the guys little girl. Even turning her down for his amusement after asking for money knowing it would seriously hurt her even if he did turn around and agree.

Her dads dying and doesnt know if he can be saved yet hes dicking with her.

I havent read beyond halfway through this chapter and I really rather not do so. Robbing and helping orphans yet acting like this I cant understand in the slightest. You dont go out if your way to help orphans then intentionally help hurt and terrify a little girl to her face just because.

Dont understand what the author is going for with this Naruto or how his actions make sense.

this is such a great fic.. very interesting concept.. hoping for a harem with grail if not to late lol..I can't wait to catch up in this fic an wish I found it sooner.. keep up the amazing work.

Please continue.

Removing Grail would really suck my man but it is your story after all...don't really like harems but if you can make it work then nice one my dude
but i would honestly love Grail in it,not only is she unique but it would help Naruto reach the next level.
Good story as usual ma man

Well she might be under an illusion but way to go for our girl Grail...might bring up some conflict sure, but when has a little chaos been bad for your health

Diana is all right i guess but in this situation i still prefer Grail...Diana is a close 3rd after Kara tho.
sweet stuff as usual.

Hokaru sama, don't know if the pairing poll is still open but i think Grail is the better option...if that's a no then it being a small harem is also good.
read this story a few years back and it's still pretty good as heck.

Definitely harem

So far I love the story. A very unique way of gathing super powered individuals. The way the Spectre is manipulating Naruto while also dealing with Grail as the Anti-life equation adds quite a bit of tension. My opinion for the pairing is Naruto x Grail x Kara x Circe.