Nick’s characterisation was perfect. Everything from the dismal ghost that we know and love, to the era-appropriate dialogue and language you used in his flashbacks. I liked the brief glimpse of his muggle parents, too, and I thought his father’s reactions to Nick being a wizard were realistic.

I really enjoyed this! I liked that it wasn’t just meaningless memories of Nick’s, but there was actually a reason for retelling this entire spiel in the end. The references to his fear of dying, yet love for adventure and excitement, were well present and I like how they came back to his current, ghost-self.

The story flowed seamlessly between flashback and present time. Great job.

Your SPaG was great, I didn’t notice any errors. ]

The prompt was used perfectly. I could see how the wisp had a negative effect on Nick, and is something that has stayed with him all his life (and un-life).

Overall, a really strong fic. Well done!

Nice