I like your fiction !

Apparently Chato means flat or pug nosed.

Fourth time I'm reading this!,

LEX MY SMOL INSANE MURDEROUS LIL SUNSHINE SON

a'right, good start

I really enjoyed your story I'm a sucker for action romance and I also liked your OC character she was very interesting

Keep up the good work on your stories

And may we meet in the halls of Valhalla

I really enjoyed this story. I thought your characterization was good and the plot was twisty enough to keep me interested but not so cliff hangery, I am aware that is not a word, that I got annoyed. Anyway I am now off to read the sequel.

YESYESYESYESYESYESYES I KNEW YOU WEREN'T A COMPLETE SADIST. You keep on throwing up, Rose. This mom over here will be excitedly waiting for your dumbfounded moment.

I love this story, you're a great writer :D

WOOO SEQUEL YES EEP

Can't wait for the sequel!

Wow!

This fanfiction was absolutely worth my time. 3
I read it all at once, because it kept me glued to my chair.
Very well done, everything just perfect. The setting, your OC, the way you creatively worked with the movies story in order to link it with your own ideas!

Now I'm curious for the yet-to-be-thought-over sequel :)

Best wishes to you dear!

BlackOrchid

OH MAN PLEASE I REALLY DO HOPE U WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS AWESOME STORY! :D

This was so freaking awesome! I love it! I read this story instead f doing my school work...oops. I just saw the movie on Saturday and now I'm obsessed. Lol

OMG I ABSOLUTELY ADORED THIS LAST CHAPTER. Overall, wonderful fic, very well written, and great storyline. Kept me on my toes quite a bit. I have thoroughly enjoyed this. Can't wait for the sequel!