Oh geez. Why would you do this to my emotions? Might have to go back and read again and then stop right before Carol calls to make myself feel better. Anyhow, job well done.

Damn it, you made me cry. Now I'm going to have to read a ton of fluff to feel better.

My God. I think I've read this before, but geeze. I was so into it and then Carol . . . It was a massive shock, I was so fully wrapped up in Donna's beautiful fantasy. You wrote an absolutely beautiful piece & thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Holy Hell, as CJ would say. This story is unbelievable. I remember reading it about a year ago, but then couldn't find it again. Talk about twists - I think this is the only fanfic I've ever read where I actually felt winded - punched in the gut - just from the shock of it...brilliant. Seriously, I can't tell you how brilliant this is. Just...wow. Thanks for posting it here!

~Len

Very well written and very, very surprising! Goes from being a wonderful lovestory to a depressing - but yet beautiful - end. Well done!