though i probably sound selfish saying this, but i genuinely enjoyed every second of this and if you ever get back into the proper mindset i beg you to keep updating this. I personally always a fan of the idea of the IchiRuki ship because Rukia was the first ever person he protected and really ever trust with his soul reaper powers, also i dont realy like the IchiHime ship mostly because ive never seen Ichigo think of Oriheme as more of a friend that he needed to protect, but i digress i generally liked the thought of his Zanpakto being so different from anyone else's because Ichigo was never like the other soul reapers and Zangestu acting differently than the others and Ichigo slowly finding a reason to fight along with the character development made me ecstatic (Especially how White reacts to things)
And i Seriously love this story so if you feel like updating it you have my suppor,t if you dont its your choice not like i can force you.

I agree with your postmortem of this story. i would quite enjoy seeing you write out some more stories

Definitely don't rush writing. I hope you continue, but don't feel obliged. Also, take breaks! You *should* write for fun, not for our satisfaction (though it's nice that you think of us), so write at your own pace and on what you're interested in.

Thank you for writing this. Good luck to you in any future endeavors!

It is understandable, I can relate partially.
It was a fun ride.
I think I'm gonna read some parts again, refresh my memory. From the name I do remember to have liked this fic very much, but for the life of me I can't recall anything about the plot.
One or two chapters should do the trick, after that the rest normally floods back to my mind as well.
The reason I know I enjoyed it very much even without actually remembering anything is because I recognized your name and the fiction's title. Not a small feat to do in my goldfish memory, so kudos to you.
I wonder if I reviewed before.. Gonna check later.

About your self critique on your past work and structure, just doing that makes you a good author. One's greatest burden is itself.

Have a good time and good luck on your future endeavours!

Oh, as a suggestion, please update the description of the fiction, place a warning that it is on permanent hiatus. So that any new readers get to know it won't get updates upfront.

"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened."

Sincerily,
TakatoMakino

didnt like it i hate aizen i dont like this story especially when ichigow gets shafted

I can't read anymore. You've confused me more than any other person. And your plan to give Karin more screen time was pathetic.

Woo! We love some nice Ichigo Rukia development. I can't wait to see more Ichigo taking care of sick Rukia. It was kinda weird to see basically the same chapter for the first half, just from Rukia's POV but I did enjoy seeing the other side. Also I find it hard to believe that a single arrow was enough to put Rukia out of commission for weeks. Oh well, but now I wait for the next update even though its been like 8 months.

I find it kind of unreal that Ichigo was able to beat Kenpachi. I mean yeah Ichigo's heritage gives him high base stats and he's been training for a little bit but I feel like he wouldn't quite be able to take down the battle maniac of a captain

So uh is Juna just completely forgotten from here on out lol. She seemed like she was gonna be important but now it seems like she'll never be mentioned again

Next

Yeah, I'm done with this, and judging by how all over the place the story has been seeming since the "it was all a dream" thing, so are you.

Still going off my last comment, I like what you did with Hell. However these next few chapters will make or break it, especially the time dilation. Ichigo only spent a few real world minutes in the Dangai and it equated to I believe like 2-3 years. Your version of Hell makes the Dangai look fast in comparison. Really hope it plays out well.

If Ichigo doesn't come back from hell OP as fuck, I'm gonna pass on anymore of this story. You yourself said the development was forced, so people dropping the story was most likely something you foresaw as well.

Great story! I came across this fanfiction earlier this morning and read through the entire thing! I love it! Please update soon...and often!