Ah-mazing! You have a way with words that is like poetry. Please don't ever stop writing! This was heartbreaking! I feel bad for them both although I always hated Jules (just a little) for breaking Sam's heart. Nicely done!

Ouch this hurts. Loved it. Very well done. :)

You've tackled a difficult topic for a first Flashpoint story. I can't recall if there have been many that have addressed Jules' POV for the night she broke it off with Sam. His distress is very obvious and visible in the scenes on the show, but Jules' innermost feelings are less visible. Excellent interpretation of and addition to what was seen in the show! I enjoyed your word skills and descriptions very much.

This was an excellent first attempt. I certainly enjoyed reading this story.

Nice really enjoyed it hope this is the beginning to some wonderful Jam!

Great after hiatus fic! Hopefully we get to read more from you! D

Absolutely fantastic. Loved it! Hope to read more from you soon.

Wow. I have never read a piece quite like this one of the actual break up. Cheers to you! I loved it so much. It was a wonderful read. You captured their emotions and feelings so well. Please tell me this means you have returned to writing!