Lmao, okay, you’re gonna laugh when you read this but when Richard gets worked up in the beginning chapters, I swear I heard Vakrian’s voice as the character! Haha! Okay, on a more serious note (yes I’m capable of such things so shaddup!), the story’s a bit rough. Not bad for your first though. And while this wasn’t my normal kind of read, I found it interesting. I loved Amythyst’s comeback in chapter 2 “... so your the old bag...” Bleak character history but the ones that are all hearts and unicorns sh**ing rainbows are typically boring and the readers don’t feel a connection to the characters. Hopefully, you’ve continued writing even if you haven’t posted anything to FF.

This story was very good vesper.. Very descriptive you feel the emotion driving the characters. And a happy ending yaaay! Very impressed. The world that subnautica encompasses is full of mystery also.. I know too well what dwell beyond the depths lol. Brilliant story telling.

No lemons? Then I ask for melons. :3

Why are these character's backstory is so dark, man?! ;-;

*Getting the point where Amythyst is a vampire*
DAAAAAAAMN!

plot hole kissing under water how do they breath and why did that escalated so quickly

Now THIS!
this is BEAUTIFUL!

well, it's over... I suppose I'll find something else soon

Been a gr8 ride, m80

OH SHIT (oh shit, oh shit, oh shit...)

here's hoping that gun can shoot down the fleet, or at least it's commander.

Please don't make the next chapter the ending

Please update soon because I love this story

Thanks for making another chapter this is the best fanfic I've ever seen keep up the good work. Striderouge signing out

Triton Trident
Scepton Sceptor

Both are staffs and symbols of power and royalty.

I see what you did there...

This is a great story please keep up the good work

Awesome Story! keep er goin