Please continue

Looks interesting please continue

For some obtuse reason I read Chapter 2 as if it was the first one and it was still up to par as a good "1st chapter".

God dammit, I was getting into it, untill I realized theres was no Chapter 3 (

Nice story, although there are things that should been rewritten, its not bad in general, if anything your concept its very interesting. I hope you update this story sometime soon.

I hope aswell, that when Issei unlocks its memories, that you unleast change the way he styles his hair, its somewhat weird imagining Issei with long hair, basically hiding his face...

awesome story so far

Good story idea, really like it so far, hope you update again soon.

If this wasn't Issei I would probable give this a chance more then I already did. The concept is good, just one of the shittiest characters out there.

Good luck with your story.

good you going on sona please add serafall too.

kinda short but im interested to see just how pissed hes gonna be when he comes back and realizes someone just tried to kill him lmao

interesting

ok, a few things. ive noticed that, at one point, you said issei sealed his memories, yet his narrative points dont really adhere to this fact. its a rather glaring problem with the flow of the story, either that or i missed something.

Adding a few to many oc's in my personal opinon with the expansion of his family, not only a difficult to maintain thing, but it is difficult for readers to remember oc's in a fanfiction, since going into it they are expecting more of a spotlight on characters they fully know.

now as you said you do not have alot of knowledge on TES, but there are a few glaring points that could make lore nuts cringe, but i wont call you out on those, AU's are AU's after all.

all in all, i like the idea of hte story, and how 'some' of it is executed, but i really think a rewrite is in order, and tone down the changes in the timeline to just 'messed up op aedra daedra issei'

So are you finally starting the story?

This story is amazing plz continue

Oh, FINALLY A STORY OF AN AEDRA OR AEDRA OR BOTH!

Update soon